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FIC: RUNNING THE BREAK (1/10)

Nov 24, 2010 16:37

Title: Running the Break (1/10)
Authors: Surfer Hips Productions (aka dazzling_icer, carolinablu85, and noelleleithe)
Artists: la_fours and noelleleithe
Rating: NC-17 (eventually)

Other Notes and Art Links: In Master Post

( Noah ran. )

fanfic: collaboration, fanfic: au, by: dazzling_icer, fic: running the break, television: atwt, fanfic

Comments 8

aimezetmusique November 29 2010, 00:45:02 UTC

Ohhh, great beginning and lovely decriptions and I LOVE me some fit!Noah. And I'm sort of in love with you all for including Jeff. He seems to be such a great friend and the dialogue is really natural...believable.

PS? I may have squeed at the interest of Aaron. My love knows no bounds. (And um, HOLLER SEATTLE.) Looooove the interaction so much. Although my heart hurt when Noah doubted that Luke even cared anymore. Because I TOTALLY GET THAT. And hurting Noah.... Boofest. But well written!

And Noah and Aaron as roommates? Um, hello PleaseMakeIntoTVShowASAP.Aaaand thank you for having Holden. I love his and Noah's relationship and it was pulled off so well here. I didn't cry. I promise. Except I'm possibly a liar. Possibly.

kelly_ken November 29 2010, 05:30:49 UTC

Aww. Adorable how Noah feels about the years he spent with Luke. And that he still wants another chance with Luke but doesn't want to come in between Luke and his happiness - so much love.
Haha, this Noah/Aaron roommates thing is going to be great - I can feel it. :P

jeri_1116 November 29 2010, 14:37:27 UTC

I loved this first chapter love that Aaron's in it also and thanks for the scenes between Holden and Noah.That was great, love waking up to a good story.

crownroyal_51 November 30 2010, 01:54:10 UTC

Aaron and Noah as roomies...oh the possibilities. You ladies have set up quite an interesting premise. I'm looking forward to seeing how this all plays out. And since you've posted so many chapters I won't have long to wait...lol.

On to the next one! :)

freakykat December 14 2010, 10:46:32 UTC

"Look, Noah. I love my brother, I really do. But he doesn't piss rainbows or shit gold or hold the keys to the entire universe. I know you love him, but dude… he's moved on. He's chosen a different life. And maybe it's time that you did the same."

I'm going to marry Aaron, okay?

What struck me the most -- and I think was done wonderfully -- here was how Noah's feelings for Luke were described. I have alot of feelings on the issue of Noah sort of pining for Luke and this is one of the few stories where it was done respectfully.

Mostly because I think he's not in constant pain over it. It just is what it is. LOVE. THAT.

Holden/Noah conversations always get to me. That was wonderful.

♥