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[recurrence]

A-APP RAPE, GET IT WHILE IT'S HOT

Remember!
- Applicants, respond anonymously.
- If you're going to do the whole "ask me if I voted you out!" thing, please state who you voted out.
- No speculating about the identity of the applicants!

Now VOTE. ker-closed~

Comments

[electricbrains]

My outs were Ko Yongha, Fuuko, Haine, and Katara. All of them were pretty much "nothing grabbed me," but feel free to ask for crit and/or poke me for a reread.

Fuuko

[electricbrains]

[poking for a reread] If it's not to much trouble~

Fuuko

[electricbrains]

[poking for a reread] If it's not too much trouble~

Re: Fuuko

[electricbrains]

What the heck. I decided to wibble back to an In; good luck!

[_superdork_]

Okay, my INs were, from memory, Katara (vote of confidence -- I think you're on the right track even if you're not quite there yet), Bloo and Mac (though I had to force myself to ignore your grammar mistakes). You guys had a strong voice, you gave me a good idea of what your character would be like to play with in camp and your ideas were original and amusing -- I especially liked the way Mac's thing for sugar was incorporated into the app.

Outs were mainly because the app felt pretty flat to me. Kagura -- man, I hate being the only one to vote you out, but the voice sounded more like Elmira than the Kagura I remember from Fruit's Basket. I'm glad it looks like you're getting in at this stage though!

Abstain on Yongha -- your app was funny, but the rapist-face and the slant of the humour in your app made me uneasy. It seemed overly fanon whereas apps are meant to show us how well you can stay IC. It also seemed very one-trick.

Fuuko

[_superdork_]

The out was because it fell flat, hm? Just asking because you didn't leave any specific note about my app. |D;

Re: Fuuko

[_superdork_]

That's right. Sorry, but there's not a lot more you can add to 'didn't grab me' -- I know you'll have put a lot of work into your app so I apologise, but when you come down to it, humour and voice and all of that is really subjective.

On rereading, I notice that you do say Fuuko is air-headed and while that does account for the haphazard nature of the app, that was one of my biggest turn-offs. I wonder if you could find a better way to portray that while keeping your app logical and coherent? Also, I didn't notice a 'dash of sarcasm' in the app.

Re: Fuuko

[_superdork_]

Thanks for the explination!

Fuuko's thought process isn't all that logical unless she's really in a dangerous situation; then she gets serious. So insulting the quality of the scenery, bragging about battling crocodiles, and then trying to make friends with the zombies even though they look cheap probably makes at least a bit of sense in her head.

Not trying to change your vote or anything! I just wanted to say that she's exciteable and tends to jump around from subject to subject pretty often, buuut I guess I didn't make the app flow clearly enough.

[supersizemecapn]

NAMETWIN okay voting now

[supersizemecapn]

OKAY in for Kagura (--'sup!), the DOGS guys, Mac, and Bloo. Abstain for Fuuko (good luck!), Katara, and Ko. Poke me if you're close.

Yongha

[supersizemecapn]

If you wouldn't mind giving my app another look I would appreciate it.

Re: Yongha

[tooshorttoride]

No problem! Have an in ♥

[spiderman_ver_4]

IN for Kagura, Ko, and Katara, ABSTAIN on all others.

Kagura, that was glorious but I fear for camp's cat. XDD Kataraaa~ come bend stuff ILU~

Fuuko

[spiderman_ver_4]

Just curious, was there any particular reason for the abstain? I'm... below borderline right now, so it can't hurt to ask~

Re: Fuuko

[spiderman_ver_4]

Heh, in my case it rarely hurts to ask. I was going to abstain due to lack of canon knowledge, but I had a close look-over at yours, and although it's got a few holes in it, you seemed to have a strong voice, so I wibbled you in.

Re: Fuuko

[spiderman_ver_4]

Thank you very much~! ♥

[fate_ality]

Holy crap Mac and Bloo are at 100% YET I AM NOT SURPRISED you guys are both sosososossoSO IN.

Oh yeah, and same for everyone else, i'm easy this morning.