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[theboxization]

OKAY, sorry for not closing and getting a post up earlier this afternoon. I had a minor disagreement with the kitchen sink and it regurgitated all over the floor and I had to clean away the ROTTEN MOLDY TURKEY BROTH AND SEWAGE SMELL. My dogs - who are perfectly intelligent and didn't take the opportunity to roll around on the floor or anything -

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[fingeroflife]

OUT on Kanda, Cruz and Watanuki.

[dontkickmeplz]

All out.

Kazuki apper

[dontkickmeplz]

I'm always up for a bit of crit, if and when you're willing. :)

Panthera apper

[dontkickmeplz]

Would you mind giving concrit?

Soma apper

[dontkickmeplz]

Any suggestions?

[marezydoats]

All out.

Panthera apper

[marezydoats]

Any and all concrit would be appreciated.

Soma apper

[marezydoats]

Have any suggestions?

[hornyqueen]

Kazuki in~.

Panthera apper

[hornyqueen]

Concrit is love if you have any.

[classprotector]

All out.

Panthera apper

[classprotector]

Though I suspect I know where I went wrong, I'd love any concrit you have.

Re: Panthera apper

[classprotector]

The story idea was really neat, but it gives me absolutely no idea what the character will be like in camp, basically. Try to get a little more reaction in there, and cut down on the background--it's a unique idea for an app, but it seems like the kind of thing that would be better suited for a first post than an app just because it serves as a great way to start conversations, but not a great way to give us an idea of how your character would interact. I think keeping the story aspect would be fine, but cutting it way down might help, or having it involve more of camp and less of canon.

Re: Panthera apper

[classprotector]

Yeah, that's definitely the general consensus. Thanks!