SuJu Fic: The Game Part Eleven [Ending]

[cairistiona]

Part One Part Two Part Three Part Four Part Five Part Six Part Seven Part Eight Part Nine Part Ten

The rest of the day passes uneventfully. Kyuhyun doesn’t even notice what they or his parents or his fans get him, because he’s too busy basking in the joy that is all of them together.

When it’s time for bed, Kyuhyun grabs Kibum’s hand and

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[chibi_roses]

YAY I MADE IT THROUGH

Although that makes it sound like it was incredibly hard to trawl through when it really wasn't, when I saw there were 11 parts I was a bit hmm, but then I started reading and couldn't stop! The whole fic flowed perfectly from start to finish, nothing dragged, it was all entertaining and happy at the start, clueless Kyuhyun was very endearing being taken advantage of by from his "innocent" bandmates, and finding out they'd been discussing him behind his back.

And then woah, Evil!Wook was evil! I was not expecting that at all. Although neither was anyone else in the band apparently. Although, when you think about it, it's always the cute, quiet ones, the ones you least suspect. I can imagine a crazy Wook, maybe not that crazy, or crazy in a different way, but crazy nonetheless. But Kyuhyun had Teuk umma and Kangin to care for him and try draw him out again, and then Kibum, who came and made things better

[cairistiona]

Oh wow, thank you soooo much! I'm really really glad you enjoyed it!

I was worried that people would be put off by the eleven parts, but it's not as long as it seems, because they're relatively short parts (LJ was protesting when I posted them; that's the only reason they're split so much).

I'm glad you felt that way, because that was exactly how I was hoping people would. Cute clueless!Kyuhyun (oh I love that, "being taken advantage of", that's brilliant because it's true) and yes, Evil!Wookie! It is definitely the quiet ones you want to watch out for

[chibi_roses]

Aw, I'm glad my comment made you happy, your fic made me happy so I guess it's only fair :)

Yeah, the parts were relatively short, but it didn't distract from the flow of the overall story, so all is well. (Methinks the LJ doth protest too much.)

I loved the clueless Kyuhyun. He went into things being all *evil laugh* and then the other would turn around and be all *get on thy knees boy, let the more experienced show you how it's done*. Oh God, my randomness, please ignore it

I can almost imagine Ryeowook waking up and suddenly remembering. Something like:
*blink blink*
*yawn*
huh, Kyu's being a bit odd.
.....
O.O
crap.
Or something along those lines. Maybe it's just me.

He does need more non-Kihae love. As lovely as Hae is, he can't be the only member who loves Kibum. Kibum's quiet and sturdy, just what Kyu needs after that.

[cairistiona]

XD

I agree. LJ definitely protests too much.

That is exactly how it was--it's not random at all--, because Kyuhyun thinks he can take control, and all of them are just like, "Um, you poor, innocent virgin...let us show you how to do it. BEND OVER!" The funny thing is that four of the five people he's completely misread (he thinks they can all be controlled, but they're all stronger willed than him...and Wookie), Sungmin being the one who he didn't, because Sungmin has strong legs, and this is obvious. :D

LOL it's possible. ^^ He doesn't remember immediately though, but that can easily come later.

Yes, this! Kibum is exactly what Kyuhyun needs; he has a reliable personality, even if he's not always there in person.

(Are there any Kibum pairings aside from KiSung and KiHae and hard-to-find KiHyun, honestly? KiChul? Does KiChul exist? IDK. Actually, the prospect of KiChul terrifies me...bad idea, haha.)

[eveandadam]

this is awesome. =D i was pretty disturbed by kyu's GAME and the really helpful hyungs and magnaes but i was practically dying at wookie's part cos wookie is wookie, (just like how yesung is yesung =p) and if wookie is NOT the way he is (or assumed to be) then i dono wad to believe in the world anymore. but thank siwon kibum is of help, which is a pleasant surprise for me. =)
and oh, did i mention tt i rely lurveee this story cos i kept laughing despite how disturbing it is? ^^ thanks for writing.

[cairistiona]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Kyu's Game wasn't meant to be disturbing, just weird and ridiculous, because only a child would think they could grow up through physical relationships with close friends of theirs. ^^ At least he understands it's weird how said friends are all being so helpful--even Kibum was being helpful to an extent. ;)

"Wookie is Wookie just like Yesung is Yesung" made me laugh. It's true. :D
^^ Ahhh nobody ever expects the evil!Wookie! There must be something hiding behind the cute exterior, nobody's that angelic all the time, not even Teukie! So therefore...something slightly unhinged! Hahaha. ^^

I have a soft spot for Kibum. I didn't want to leave him out, poor guy. He gets forgotten about too much. Also, I like KiHyun. ^^ So Kibum gets to be a helpful!hyung just like the others. :D

I'm glad you enjoyed it despite the disturbingness! The fact it made you laugh makes my smile go like Kyuhyun's: XD!! Thank you for reading!

[shiryu_yugure]

Holy wow. Holy wow. This left me incoherent for a bit because you unleashed evil!Wook and I love Wook to bits but the way you wrote this made me keep going and ahh, poor Kyuhyun. Although I did giggle pretty massively at parts, but the simple fact that you made one of my all-time favorites evil and I kept on reading despite the fact makes me bow to you. xD Partly broken K.R.Y. makes me want to bawl a little ;-;

Kyuhyun was definitely having too much fun at the beginning, but we won't blame him :P And Kibum! Very sweet ending to what was otherwise a roller coaster fic. Nice job ^^

[cairistiona]

Ahh! I'm sorry! Wookie made me do it! He has to be bad sometimes, just like Henry can't always be cute and innocent. :D

I'm really pleased you kept on reading even after the broken KRY. I'm glad you found some of it funny as well. ^^

Kyuhyun really, really was having too much fun--for the majority of the fic, in fact--, but that's because he wanted to try something new. ;) He's such a child.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[vic_sim]

i made it through!!!
yes!
awwww
wow
evil wookie
wow
still is kinda in shock
but kihyun at the end!
yes!
i love kihyun
ahhh

i enjoyed it!seriously.
though i have to get back to work now.
great job!

[cairistiona]

Congratulations for making it through the marathon! ;)

Yes, it is surprising, isn't it? ^^ Sorry it was such a shock. ^^

Me too! There can never be enough KiHyun. I love it so much. :D

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thank you! And don't tire yourself out with work, that's not fun. :P

[thundersquall]

Ok my PROPER comment now.

WOW. Just ohmyfuckingGodSiwon WOW

[cairistiona]

Thank you so much for reading! I'm really glad you enjoyed it all!

Haha, supremely hot Ryeowook is always a good thing.

Oh yes, that's exactly how the Game ended up: everyone having sex with him, rather than him having sex with them. He's not really that disappointed after Henry. :D (Henry can't always be innocent, haha.)

Yeah, I don't know why Kibum is always just for sex, because I've read a load of KiHyuns and KiSungs and even a KiHae or two and they always end up having sex and it's very odd. I just thought, "I'm not making them a couple, even though I want to" (I'm tempted to write a KiHyun sequel though) "but it would be nice if Kibum decided he wanted to help baby!Kyu too. :D"

^^ Yay!

Thank you for reading it! ^^ XDDDD