SuJu Fic: The Game Part Eleven [Ending]

May 08, 2009 17:37

Part One Part Two Part Three Part Four Part Five Part Six Part Seven Part Eight Part Nine Part Ten

The rest of the day passes uneventfully. Kyuhyun doesn’t even notice what they or his parents or his fans get him, because he’s too busy basking in the joy that is all of them together.

When it’s time for bed, Kyuhyun grabs Kibum’s hand and ( Read more... )

story: the game, fic: super junior, pairing: everyone/kyuhyun, super junior m are awesome, fic, super junior are awesome

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thundersquall May 9 2009, 04:06:41 UTC
Ok my PROPER comment now.

WOW. Just ohmyfuckingGodSiwon WOW.

Ok first off, I love Ryeowook to pieces, every inch of him, so reading about him being all evil and unhinged was a little shock to my system at first, because for the love of me I can't imagine him being THAT insane. Or at least, not insane in THAT way. But I did love it, I loved the way you wrote it, and the whole story, and even though it was brutal, what he did to Kyuhyun, on some weird primal level I find Ryeowook so supremely hot. In any case, it's certainly not making me love him any less. =)

And Kyuhyun! Poor magnae, being all smirky and snarky and trying to lay everyone in the band only to find that HE'S the one getting laid. Even mochi Henry gets the control. LOL~

The last part was so loving, and I just went awwwww at that. I have a soft spot for any pairing with Kibum, but most of the time Kibum is written as some sex beast and he's all about the sex, so to read the tender and sweet side of him was really nice.

The dynamics of Leeteuk-umma and Kangin-appa, as usual, rock my world.

Thank you for writing this great story, I was hooked from Part 1 and couldn't stop. =) Even if my Ryeowook was written as an insane asshole, but I'll overlook that. XDDDDDD

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cairistiona May 9 2009, 14:37:24 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! I'm really glad you enjoyed it all!

Haha, supremely hot Ryeowook is always a good thing.

Oh yes, that's exactly how the Game ended up: everyone having sex with him, rather than him having sex with them. He's not really that disappointed after Henry. :D (Henry can't always be innocent, haha.)

Yeah, I don't know why Kibum is always just for sex, because I've read a load of KiHyuns and KiSungs and even a KiHae or two and they always end up having sex and it's very odd. I just thought, "I'm not making them a couple, even though I want to" (I'm tempted to write a KiHyun sequel though) "but it would be nice if Kibum decided he wanted to help baby!Kyu too. :D"

^^ Yay!

Thank you for reading it! ^^ XDDDD

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