SuJu Fic: The Game Part Eleven [Ending]
Part One Part Two Part Three Part Four Part Five Part Six Part Seven Part Eight Part Nine Part Ten
The rest of the day passes uneventfully. Kyuhyun doesn’t even notice what they or his parents or his fans get him, because he’s too busy basking in the joy that is all of them together.
When it’s time for bed, Kyuhyun grabs Kibum’s hand and ( Read more... )
The rest of the day passes uneventfully. Kyuhyun doesn’t even notice what they or his parents or his fans get him, because he’s too busy basking in the joy that is all of them together.
When it’s time for bed, Kyuhyun grabs Kibum’s hand and ( Read more... )
Although that makes it sound like it was incredibly hard to trawl through when it really wasn't, when I saw there were 11 parts I was a bit hmm, but then I started reading and couldn't stop! The whole fic flowed perfectly from start to finish, nothing dragged, it was all entertaining and happy at the start, clueless Kyuhyun was very endearing being taken advantage of by from his "innocent" bandmates, and finding out they'd been discussing him behind his back.
And then woah, Evil!Wook was evil! I was not expecting that at all. Although neither was anyone else in the band apparently. Although, when you think about it, it's always the cute, quiet ones, the ones you least suspect. I can imagine a crazy Wook, maybe not that crazy, or crazy in a different way, but crazy nonetheless. But Kyuhyun had Teuk umma and Kangin to care for him and try draw him out again, and then Kibum, who came and made things better ( ... )
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I was worried that people would be put off by the eleven parts, but it's not as long as it seems, because they're relatively short parts (LJ was protesting when I posted them; that's the only reason they're split so much).
I'm glad you felt that way, because that was exactly how I was hoping people would. Cute clueless!Kyuhyun (oh I love that, "being taken advantage of", that's brilliant because it's true) and yes, Evil!Wookie! It is definitely the quiet ones you want to watch out for ( ... )
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Yeah, the parts were relatively short, but it didn't distract from the flow of the overall story, so all is well. (Methinks the LJ doth protest too much.)
I loved the clueless Kyuhyun. He went into things being all *evil laugh* and then the other would turn around and be all *get on thy knees boy, let the more experienced show you how it's done*. Oh God, my randomness, please ignore it
I can almost imagine Ryeowook waking up and suddenly remembering. Something like:
*blink blink*
*yawn*
huh, Kyu's being a bit odd.
.....
O.O
crap.
Or something along those lines. Maybe it's just me.
He does need more non-Kihae love. As lovely as Hae is, he can't be the only member who loves Kibum. Kibum's quiet and sturdy, just what Kyu needs after that.
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I agree. LJ definitely protests too much.
That is exactly how it was--it's not random at all--, because Kyuhyun thinks he can take control, and all of them are just like, "Um, you poor, innocent virgin...let us show you how to do it. BEND OVER!" The funny thing is that four of the five people he's completely misread (he thinks they can all be controlled, but they're all stronger willed than him...and Wookie), Sungmin being the one who he didn't, because Sungmin has strong legs, and this is obvious. :D
LOL it's possible. ^^ He doesn't remember immediately though, but that can easily come later.
Yes, this! Kibum is exactly what Kyuhyun needs; he has a reliable personality, even if he's not always there in person.
(Are there any Kibum pairings aside from KiSung and KiHae and hard-to-find KiHyun, honestly? KiChul? Does KiChul exist? IDK. Actually, the prospect of KiChul terrifies me...bad idea, haha.)
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Sungmin does have strong legs. Sungmin also has very nice legs and I remember looking at some pictures of him and thinking I wouldn't mind his legs, or ones that looked similar.
Kibum may not always be there, but I can imagine his presence lingers there for a while.
Kibum pairings.... Kichul does actually exist, I've read a couple of fics with the pairing, but I don't think there have been many for a while. Kiwook exists as well. I think there have been a couple with the Kiwon pairing too. Actually, I vaguely remember a fic where Kibum went and had sex with all the members of Suju. Most, if not all.
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Sungmin does. Sungmin in a skirt. ^^ Haha. I wouldn't mind his legs either. :D
Oh yes, yes it does. Kyuhyun can't stop thinking about him for weeks and Kibum begins to ring the house whenever he can. :D
It...does? Wow. I saw a KiWook today posted on Miracle and my response was, "What?!!" It was so weird! But it kind of makes sense as they were the magnaes before Kyu. KiWon is just odd.
I'd like to read that, I think, haha. ^^ It sounds epic. Though Kibum has far too much sex in fanfiction, which is why he doesn't in mine. ^^ Also, Kyuhyun won't be having sex for many, many, many years, because he keeps being reminded of the trauma. He still gets nightmares years along the line.
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Sungmin looks good in skirts and it is Not Fair. Life is not fair, there are far too many boys who look good in skirts whilst some girls struggle and cry to look half as good.
well I guess Kichul exists because they used to live and act together, and Kibum and Ryeowook are apparently (or were, not sure) good friends because they're so close in age.
It was pretty epic, I would find a link but I can't remember who wrote it or anything.
Kibum does have a lot of sex in fanfiction. All he ever seems to do is read or have sex. Not much variety in his life. That is why he is good for Kyuhyun. Kyu can't and doesn't want to have sex, and Kibum needs to have a break for a while and find some other hobbies to occupy his time, when he isn't with Kyuhyun.
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He does. I will never look good in a skirt. :( This is sort of depressing.
Ahhh okay, that makes sense, sort of.
Maybe we should post a WCIF on Miracle, haha. ;)
You're right--he really does in fanfiction. Sometimes he plays games, too, but that's about it. I suppose this is why Kyuhyun is good for him as well, because of the same reasons you put: Kyu can't and won't have sex again for some time (not even to top, mwahaha). I agree with your entire paragraph. Also, it is giving me fic ideas for a sequel. :D
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I...feel stupid. WCIF? I will most likely kick myself when it is explained to me.
Ooh, ideas for a sequel. Intriguing. They can just not have sex and play games together for a long time. Or read to each other. That's a very cute image actually...
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Where Can I Find...? :D It's a sims term. I just nicked it. ^^
That...that sounds horrendously cute. Both bits; playing games and reading to each other, however reading to each other made me think of this:
I'm now plagued with the idea of Leeteuk tucking Kyuhyun into bed and reading him to sleep. fbdmkdashfksad Not right. (But the CUTENESS OF THAT, HONESTLY.)
Therefore, Kibum reading to Kyuhyun will always remind me of incest. *sighs pitifully*
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OH that makes sense now, I thought it would be something like that. It's probably in the tags, I'm just too lazy to search.
...Okay, I was going to say what a weird thing for that to remind you about, but I suddenly got an image of 5 year old Kyu being tucked into bed by Umma Teuk, and then trying to read aloud to him in an adorable child voice, and stumbling a bit over the words, whilst Umma Teuk just sits there and smiles and strokes Kyu's hair. That last bit sounded a bit paedo-ish to me but nevermind. So now it will remind me of incest too. I put the blame for this on you.
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I would look then, only I don't know what I'm looking for. :P
LOL it reminds me of it because of the other fic I'm writing about, where Teukie is ten years old (and a girl--girls!AUs are fun) and they're at school with everyone except Hannie, Kibum, Zhou Mi and Siwon--they come later--and is the umma of the group. Teukie's baby is Kyuhyun (Kangin's is Henry--he's six ^^), who is seven and acts like a five year old when just with Teukie and Kangin (and Yesung), and there's a scene basically where they're sleeping in a bed together and one where Teukie is just reading her to sleep and stuff. ^^ It's so cute. :D No paedophilia, lol, they're all kids. ^^
Ungh, that image you gave me is so adorable that I might have to write a fic where KangTeuk have a Kyubaby just so I can have that scene of Kyu reading adorably to Mummy. *squeals*
I blame YOU. So we can blame each other. :P
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That sounds like an adorable fic, Henry as a 6 year old has got to be one of the most adorable and squeal-worthy images ever. Will this be a girl Henry and Kangin or not? Because girl! Kangin is quite hard to picture, it just doesn't quite fit. Neither does girl! Henry, although that is probably easier to see mentally than girl! Kangin. Aww, the all together in bed scene just oozes cuteness. And now I'm seeing Kyubaby being all "No mummy, I'm going to read tonight" and then struggles proudly through a book.
Yay, shared blame :D It's basically the same as no blame but it's always fun to be "Well you started it".
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Everyone is a girl except Kangin, Henry, Siwon, Shindong, Yunho, Changmin, Yoochun and Junsu, because DBSK had to be in there, too. :D I also made an entirely new pairing for this fic: HaeMin, mwahahaha.
There's four of them in the bed--Teukie, Kyuhyun, Yesung and Kangin--so it's really really cute (Kangin's mother keeps taking photos).
*squeal* That sounds absolutely adorable. ^^ SO WRITING THAT EVENTUALLY.
YOU DID START IT! :P IT WAS YOUR FAULT! *roffles*
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Which Min?
There will be little girl! Yesung? Because that could be both hilarious and also make you want to pinch his/her cheeks. I can see her being a bit of a sulky child at times. Not sure why. I'm not surprised Kangin's mum keeps taking photos, I'd takes loads and frame them and hang them up around the house.
I AM ANTICIPATING THAT FIC. IF ONLY JUST FOR THAT SCENE. And the rest, of course. But mainly that.
I'm going to be dignified and mature and not reply to that. YOUYOUYOUYOUYOUYOUYOUYOUYOUYOUYOUYOUYOU :P
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Changmin. I told you it wasn't a real pairing. :P Donghae/Changmin does not exist, haha.
Yeah. I killed their ages, so she's one of the younger ones. She's really cute. She's really quiet because she's been through some really hard times growing up. She's one of my favourites to write. She can be a bit sulky sometimes too, but she's mostly just sad. Kyuhyun adores her (Yesung being her unni) and Yesung adores Kyuhyun (when they're teenagers, in a less-than-sisterly way). ^^
They sleep in the bed together for three nights, not just one, and Kangin's mum thinks they're the cutest things in the world. She says how Kangin's so fatherly with his wife, and being ten/nine, the two of them's reaction is just O.O!!!
I'm hoping to finish it...later...sometime. Because that's actually the prestory/backstory. Yeah, I'm writing the backstories before the main story, how backwards am I? ^^ I can make them prequels, haha.
Me too. ;) NOT TRUE! IT WAS YOU, DEFINITELY YOU!
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