Jane and I.

[cadhla]

She announces herself with the smell of sweat, cheap perfume and clove cigarettes doubtless snatched from the lips of some open-mouthed admirer who found her gyrating on the dance floor of a bar where the neon never goes out and the sawdust on the floor is layered like the strata of the earth. Her heels clack telegraph signals on the floor, stop-

Comments

[kaleidoscopia]

it makes me want to draw pictures. it makes me feel like a jane.

[tigertoy]

Beautiful writing. The only thing that bothers me is the smoking, because for me personally smoking is such an absolute turn-off that adding it to the mental picture shatters it.

[cadhla]

I'm not pro-smoking; that doesn't, unfortunately, prevent my muse from being a smoker. Jane's a bitch that way.

[plaid_dragon]

Have I mentioned how much I love your writing? You make such clear pictures, and your style is stunning.