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ca_pierson

STORY - Calling in a Debt - Chapter 10

Mar 10, 2006 20:08

Disclaimers: Neither the idea of Harry Potter nor the characters belong to me in any way. They are the sole property of JKR. I do not make any money of this story either.

Thanks to my wonderful betas Allzugern, Amber, darkmoore munchkinofdoom and Christine Pierson ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

pervert_bitch March 10 2006, 12:11:20 UTC

But this is getting more complicated by the minute! ARGH!!!!
Also... I am still confused for some things... specially those "false memory" things... and, I don't know, sounds like a new idea going into the fic... like when you were writing (and then stopped for some time) you decided to put this idea out of nowhere which will make sense only to you until we read the whole thing... which is what I am waiting for...
Damn. But this Harry being son of Voldie is creepy. And apparently Voldie never find out... but how the prophecy gets into this... weird out here :P

ca_pierson March 10 2006, 12:30:14 UTC

I thought creativitiy and surprises are better than being predictable ;). Also I heard it's bad for the heart to suppress ideas *grins*.

I'm sure chapter 11 with finally answer some of what you want to know. If you have any other burning questions now is the time to ask them. I might still be able to answer them in the next chapter.

Be well,
Cassandra

munchkinofdoom March 10 2006, 18:29:20 UTC

Good grief, you react well to challenges! *grins* I tell you you can't play with perspective from those people stored in a pensieve memory and you produce this! I loved the older Severus' thoughts as he watched his younger counterpart. Especially when baby Sev said he was going to be their spy. Nicely done.

Just throw the next part at me when you're ready.

ca_pierson March 11 2006, 01:43:30 UTC

I like challenes, the deadlines are the only thing keeping me away from them. It's the time pressure, I don't do well with that part of the package.

The next chapter is coming along nicely and you can expect it for sometime next week, as it's half-way done already. BTW, I incorporated what you were talking about in your last e-mail and it works interestingly well. I've built on it a little more to get rid of some plot holes darkmoore found.

lothy March 11 2006, 15:23:21 UTC

Cliffhanger, lovely. Good chapter, but it's left me utterly desperate for the next one...

ca_pierson March 11 2006, 15:25:56 UTC

... which is going through beta right now. No long wait for chapter 11, I promise.

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ca_pierson March 16 2006, 22:49:15 UTC

(^_^) You're welcome. Thanks for telling me that you liked it. And you're right: wait and see :).

xikum March 21 2006, 21:51:53 UTC

Interesting style, like snapshots, vignettes, each one separated by some time, and each one detailed enough to give a sense of what has happened, is happening, to tie it all together. This is so very different style from anything else I have read. It is also an enthralling tale... um, quite a cliffie, here... seems you have a lot of 11 done...how soon may we expect/hope for an update ( ... )

ca_pierson March 22 2006, 00:49:13 UTC

Hi! Wow, thanks for the long review ( ... )