SN - Fanfic

[burned_phoenix]

Title: It Wasn't Supposed To Be This Way 1/1
Author: burned_phoenix
Rating: R at the most
Characters/Pairings: Jensen Ackles / Jared Padalecki
Spoilers/Universe: Crime-AU
Wordcount: 1.011
Summary: It just wasn't supposed to be this way.
Warnings: major emotional pain,

Comments

[tattoo_kink]

*dumbfounded*

Anyone, anyone - Bueller?

Oookay. I'd love to say something like: that fic really made my day --- but actually I'm still uhm... well...

THAT WAS UNEXPECTED!

Usually I won't read something like that at all, cause it always leave me with a lump in my throat and belly aches... but nonetheless this was very well written.

You did a great job, but I definitely prefer happily ever after fics - so, could you please try something like that necxt... pretty please? *g*

<3333333

[burned_phoenix]

I will really, really try for something hot and sexy with a happy ending next! I swear :D

I can't even really tell where this one came from. there was this movie last night and that one scene kinda screamed and ran away turning into THIS :D

[tattoo_kink]

You're not allowed to watch movies in the middle of the night!

What were you watching, anyway? *g*

[burned_phoenix]

it wasn't THAT late :D that boogeyman night I made didn't have any lasting results like this :D

it was some swedish crime show or something on zdf :D

[karfraegh]

ooohhhh... sighs.... nicely done babe...

HUGS XXX

[burned_phoenix]

you think? I just wrote it on the train because I was afraid if I waited til I was at work that it would vanish again :D

for the first piece of writing in such a long time, I think I'm pretty ok with it :)

*hugs you back TIGHTLY* I miss you, it feels like it's been ages since we talked!

[motherrussia91]

I really really liked this.

Especially the way you did the ending; "...the letter flutter to the floor splattered with the blood of FBI Special Agent Jensen Ackles. Deceased." I don't know what it is about it but it was strong and I liked it a lot.

I really wish there was more to this, actually. Like, I wish we had gotten them falling in love, and the whole reason for the take down, and what exactly happened on the job, for Jensen to have to kill Jared. (...That is what happened, right? Jensen had to kill him to finish the job?)

Great job, especially if it's the first you've done in a while.

[burned_phoenix]

well, actually jensen had to kill jared to save his own life because he thought jared was gonna rat him out to jeff, and jeff would kill him for being the one who sabotaged the job they were doing with jeff

[cha]

*blinks* Holy Crap! that upset me!!! I never read the warnings because I always want to experience the story without any preconceived ideas!

Really well-written. Sure felt like it oculd have been more!!

[burned_phoenix]

mission accomplished I guess :D no, really, it's weird, that the first thing that begs to be written turned out to be this, but it almost wouldn't let me sleep the night before :D

I mostly skip over the warnings too, because I hate it if they kill all the surprise, or give the plot away too early :)

I'm really glad you think so, thanks, darling! :) *is proud* :D yeah, it could have been more, but for the moment, it was just that part that really needed to get out :)

I have a few more WIPs lying around, maybe now that things are getting sorted, they will get finished too :) *bounces* :D

[magser]

Holy fuck.....that just.....jesus christ that just broke me.....I knew I shouldnt have read it, not today of all days....fuck woman!
Excellent, but shit that hurt.....

[burned_phoenix]

aww, sweety-sweets! something I can do to cheer you up now? :) *snuggles*

but I kinda like your reaction *g*