MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: JUNE 2012

[bubblybliss]

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[outofroman]

Barbuddha
☆MUSES: cryptologist

Lotteworld
☆MUSES: tonightsheaven

Undersounds
☆MUSES: foreverlasts

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

[budaejjigae]

What I like about Myungsoo is that while he has that certain quiet side of him, it's not that serious to the extent that she feels too intimidated to talk to him. The both of them haven't talked much, but his tweets seem to reveal a more playful part of his personality, so hopefully they'll be able to interact more in the future, because he seems to be a well-layered muse ^^

[rap]

Myungsoo, Myungsoo, Myungsoo...!

I don't know how useful this comment is going to be, mainly because I really love your Myungsoo. First off, I want to say that you pick up on so many of the real's subtleties that I don't think many people would be able to spot, and you incorporate them into his personality. And while the real is such a mystery to me, I think you do him a lot of justice. He's such a good balance of cute, strange, quiet, loud, so many things~! The only thing I think I could really critique you on is having L open up to Dongwoo a little more, but then again, Dongwoo's not around enough, so I don't think my critique honestly stands! But the thing is, when they do talk together, it's really, really adorable. Dongwoo wants Myungsoo to know he can always rely on him, so I hope they get to talk even more in the future. ♥

[yeors]

I like all your muses for different reasons. :3 L is complex...he has such an array of emotions it's quite hard to believe he's not real. The only critique I can give you is to stretch his inner circle a bit more, and as usual, apply himself in group settings. Easy does it! Change doesn't happen overnight, and we've talked about this tête à tête before, so I know you're probably tired of hearing about it. We have good intentions, honest. n_n I strongly believe L is capable of boisterousness, we've heard stories but yet to see them, so it is about time he shares it with the class. Ahem.

All my praises to you for your neverending tolerance of me hahaha. :( I know my unpredictability lately has been hard on you.Changjo is a delight to see around, though it's mostly just twitter, and his ability to troll even the king of trolls is rather remarkable. We have too many muses talking to each other. That could be an issue. Or it could just be lovely for what it is

[keyreign]

Ringback
☆MUSES: keyreign
OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

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[sheng]

ringback
☆MUSES: sheng

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

[drums]

Yi-di-lay-di-hoo! I honestly am not sure about how the reals of these two interact, since it's one of the few friendships we haven't really been able to see between the EXO boys, but I feel/hope that it's a bit reminiscent of how our muses are

[ballads]

RINGBACK
☆MUSES: ballads

homeless / psl
☆MUSES: startmission

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

Since the comments on the positive-negative thing I've worked on some stuff with Baekhyun, and I've definitely tried to have him around more so hopefully there's some visible improvement somewhere? Though there are one or two people that because of reasons I've ended up totally skipping out on and ugh just so many sorrys I am awful. ;;

[starburst]

I'm writing this on my phone, so this will be short. My apologies.

I don't know much about the real, so I can't give much to go on characteristically, however, I think that Baekhyun is really nice. Hes super easy for Sohyun to talk to and it just flows naturally between them. :)

Also, scening was fun. Walls of text just for action... Haha! I hope we can para next time. Maybe thread?

The only thing that I can think of that might be negative is that we dunno when he's on or not. Ninja!bacon. :3 however, with that said, we have seen him on twitter some!! :)

Ok. That was it. Uhm. Bye!

[ballads]

I love these two for that exact reason, their conversations come totally easily and he finds her really interesting to talk to naturally without having to look for more things to say. ♥

He doesn't get to scene much (I actually feel like I lose out on a lot of them because I'm so dang awkward) so I had a really good time with what we did and I'm sorry for completely failing OTL and also failing to not drown in words, why do I talk too much.

I'll be honest and say he's been hiding on purpose a little bit lately, and did mean to strap on a pair and reappear last night, but after something like two weeks of 2hr naps and too much coffee I ended up sleeping the entire night instead... orz. So, the ninja is definitely a temporary thing. ee;

[starburst]

Ah. She might have been wondering that and will drag him out when she can. ><

But let's try to thread sometime? Talking too much is NOT a problem. I love it. :3

Also. Good that you slept! Damnit, girl, you needed that.

[yeors]

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)
OK ☑ UNLISTED MUSES

barbuddha
☆MUSES: yeors

undersounds
☆MUSES: geniusprone

OTL Deepest apologies for disappearing. Trying to get them back into being more active again! Might be a bit shakey with their presentation, but I hope to keep working on it.

[yu_hoo]

I love your Sungyeol. He's funny and feeds Yukwon's stupidity and humours him. And somewhat recently there was a rather serious conversation that I don't think Yukwon was expecting to get pulled into having but he apparently really needed it. I think Sungyeol is, I dunno how to put it, but he seems to be one of the hyungs that Kwon didn't know how important he was until they started talking more? And now it seems like he's become really important to Kwon. Actually, even before recently, whenever Sungyeol favourited any of Kwon's tweets or anything, it always made Kwon's day, so I dunno what was up with that. u_u It's even more severe now.

We haven't gotten to scene a lot with just the two of us, but based on the little that did happen, Sungyeol is just amazing. ;; And adorable. I really like your writing and the detail that goes into your tags. I know I'm not much good on giving crit but I do think they need to talk and scene more. ._. That's about it.............. yep. Sorry. D:

[yeors]

I am so glad Yukwon and Sungyeol are speaking more! And.. actually scening. Sorta. Ha. Ha. OTL

The direction of that conversation was quite surprising on this side as well...but Sungyeol has his serious moments! Sometimes. Not often, but they manifests when required. n_n Also glad to be of hyung-service to the ever uplifting Yukwon! He really does crack Sungyeol up with his antics and bad jokes. :3 I think the way Sungyeol views his friendship with Yukwon is.. consistency. Lots of shit happens, but the sun still rises, people wake up, and Yukwon still posts jokes on twitter. When there was a moment of no Yukwon on twitter, he definitely felt it.

Let's scene more! Understandably, the chances maybe few with our online hours... but we're patient. :3;;;; Sungyeol would like to keep Yukwon forever, and become closer with him! I believe they have potential to be very good for each other (and also very mischievous) type of friends.

[yu_hoo]

Me too. XD They get crazy in their conversations. And I dunno where you went yesterday. :|

It seems like they both had a serious moment at the same time! But we'll just blame Sungyeol for asking that one question and Kwon can take partial blame. HIS JOKES ARE NOT BAD, OKAY?!! It's good to know that his jokes are appreciated, though~ He tries to say at least one stupid thing on twitter a day, whether it's picking on someone from Infinite coughHoyacough or a 'bad' joke. Brightens his own mood like that, haha.

These two are going to be no good for anyone in Infinite at this rate. With Kwon teasing the members he talks to and Sungyeol being Sungyeol... XD Well... we'll see! More scenes are in order, we'll figure something out with hours! ^^ And Sungyeol can keep Kwon, I don't want him. ㅎ_ㅎ