MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: JUNE 2012

[bubblybliss]

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RINGBACK
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homeless / psl
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OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

Since the comments on the positive-negative thing I've worked on some stuff with Baekhyun, and I've definitely tried to have him around more so hopefully there's some visible improvement somewhere? Though there are one or two people that because of reasons I've ended up totally skipping out on and ugh just so many sorrys I am awful. ;;

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I'm writing this on my phone, so this will be short. My apologies.

I don't know much about the real, so I can't give much to go on characteristically, however, I think that Baekhyun is really nice. Hes super easy for Sohyun to talk to and it just flows naturally between them. :)

Also, scening was fun. Walls of text just for action... Haha! I hope we can para next time. Maybe thread?

The only thing that I can think of that might be negative is that we dunno when he's on or not. Ninja!bacon. :3 however, with that said, we have seen him on twitter some!! :)

Ok. That was it. Uhm. Bye!

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I love these two for that exact reason, their conversations come totally easily and he finds her really interesting to talk to naturally without having to look for more things to say. ♥

He doesn't get to scene much (I actually feel like I lose out on a lot of them because I'm so dang awkward) so I had a really good time with what we did and I'm sorry for completely failing OTL and also failing to not drown in words, why do I talk too much.

I'll be honest and say he's been hiding on purpose a little bit lately, and did mean to strap on a pair and reappear last night, but after something like two weeks of 2hr naps and too much coffee I ended up sleeping the entire night instead... orz. So, the ninja is definitely a temporary thing. ee;

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Ah. She might have been wondering that and will drag him out when she can. ><

But let's try to thread sometime? Talking too much is NOT a problem. I love it. :3

Also. Good that you slept! Damnit, girl, you needed that.

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I hope she does! He's trying, but obviously what happened hasn't happened to him before so he's been a little asdkjsdh. uu;

Threading would be awesome, and thank you for not wanting to stab me in the eye. :|

I diiid, but I feel like I missed so much just from that and I hate it agh. Who needs to sleep anyway...

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Are you two ninjaing now? She totally will. :3 she misses him.

Why on earth would I wanna stab you for having a life? Sleep and such is needed for awesome threading after all! :3

You did. Shush. :)

[getscloser]

I just have to say that I am really, really glad I joined the PSL, and your Chanyeol is Awesome +20. As someone who's just starting out in the EXO fandom, I can't say if he's IC or not, but he's hilarious and interacting with him is always a pleasure. I haven't been around lately but hopefully that will get better soon; he and Chen still need to go buy those Bro Code books. 8D

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asdjkdsf Jongdae! No word of a lie I was just thinking today that I'd get this brat to PM his favorite bro and see what's up because we have missed you guys and I was worried you weren't coming back. ;;

First off thank you omg. ♥ Honestly Chen is the one I know the absolute least about in EXO, but I've started to see the real with your muse's personality because he is awesome and if that's wrong, I don't want to be right. Their silent conversations are the best thing ever and I love how they were bros right off with zero awkward.

Basically get back to us ASAP. ♥

[getscloser]

Oh we are definitely coming back, it's just that I've been drowning in Work +100 lately and it's just too sdjgsdkgdks to put him around when I have a million deadlines looming over me. HOWEVER! Yes I am so so happy that he and Chanyeol get along so incredibly well; I like how they just need to look at each other to get each other and basically twelvelegends is everything I wanted in a PSL, EXO are one, bromance of the century, hetebrosexual loving, etc.

We will continue to try and do well, but you, you brilliant thing you, never change your Chanyeol, HE IS TOO MUCH FUN. ♥ Love him.

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Obviously I understand about work... I'll still sadface at it for taking away my favorite Jongdae for however long (I've played against I think four? Yours definitely wins.) but understandable. ;; You totally hit the nail on the head there about why our PSL is awesome though. >: EXO really are one. Even if real brofists can not always be had!

asdjkds you are too nice.

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As I silently shrivel up because you play Chanyeol and are probably judging mine. ;;
and if you want to let me know how much i suck or things that i should work on, you can feel free to pm me crit!I think that since the +/- post, these two have become a bit closer. And I hope that you feel the same

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Actually, your Chanyeol is about sixty million times better than mine so I wouldn't worry orz

I do feel like these two are getting to the point where they should be in terms of closeness, which I'm really happy about. ♥ I feel like they have a sort of thing where Yeol keeps Baek out of the gutter and Baek keeps Yeol out of the clouds, if that makes sense? Especially with the slightly more serious talks they've been able to have lately. At least to me it feels like there's a real friendship there now which I did worry about before, and I'm so glad we've been able to fix this somewhat since I adore your muse and what's Tubbyun without his Chubbyeol...

I wouldn't call it crit exactly but since these two are IRL habitually about six steps apart at most I feel like we should definitely scene more! Part of the reason why it doesn't happen is probably my own awkwardness since I fret about if it's okay or not but... orz I'd been meaning to work something out with you about that once I got up the balls to do it so hi!

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I agree about the sceneing! They're usually in the same room or a room over, so I don't see why they wouldn't physically interact more! Actually, if you ever just want to spontaneously scene, feel free to go for it without even asking beforehand and just start something up. ^^

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Alrighty then, likewise!

[baecon]

Hi. So. Um. I adore you.

...and I'd love to just leave it at that because that's really all I wanted to say, but apparently I'm not supposed "to explode all over the other person in a fit of unintelligible happiness". So, I shall attempt at elaborating intelligently. It's only been a few weeks, but I love how these two clicked right away since the beginning of time ♥ Then things went on from there, but nothing's been short of amazing so far. I absolutely adore your Chanyeoll I think you have the real's personality hands down and your writing style, I love, love, love and I am horrible at this crit thing which is why I never show my face here, but thank you for the awesome and pleasetobestayingcloseforever ♥

Until then, I await your arrival with baited breath. >8) ♥ Malapropism loves you too.

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Oh hey it's someone else who writes one of my muses better than I ever could!

This kid is a giant, giant ball of fail both literally and figuratively so I won't lie, I don't even know what you especially even see in him OTL especially when Baekhyun is so sweet and funny and adorable and a hundred other positive adjectives and you are so much better than me at writing various things and and and all the reasons why I keep ending up going to work on no sleep.

Forever thanking you for chasing us up in the beginning though. I'd been unsure about playing him and almost decided not to bother... but then I tried and ugh, so much fun, and you guys are perfect.

... Except when you do that to me, adsjkshdf stop that.