MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: JUNE 2012

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[lkim]

LOTTEWORLD
☆MUSES: lkim

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
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Even if I followed this guy for a little whole now, he's still a new muse to me. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. :)

[mochifaces]

I've actually had two muses talk against him and I have to admit, both times he's surprised them. While I don't follow Infinite and so know very little about Myungsoo, I think sometimes the things he says can be considered quite flirtatious? ;; Of course, if that's how he's meant to be, then kudos to you!

What I really do like about him is that he's quite open to taking the initiative to talk to new people! He's really friendly and Sohyun definitely warmed up to him real quick.

[lkim]

Hmm... would you say it's flirtatious in the way that he's open to calling Sohyun cute and things like that? Because if that's the case, it's what he's like. He doesn't hold back on things like that because he's a very honest person so if he feels she's cute, he'll tell her. Any other sort of flirtation should probably be reeled in if it's excessive! I'll keep it in mind. :)

Thanks! He tries! XD

[mochifaces]

Ahh, it's not so much that! I think... when he invited her over for a nap, it just came as a huge surprise and we weren't sure whether he was being serious or not, haha! I think it's not so much the actual things, but just some certain things he says that can be misunderstood?

[mochifaces]

I'm not sure where to start with Jihyun! ;; I love the way you play her, but, maybe it's just my own interpretation of Jihyun, but I find that she doesn't have enough of the gentle leader characteristics in her? I understand that Jihyun has her strange, 4D moments, but right now I feel that she's being played that way constantly? I know they haven't gotten to talk much yet, so this is mostly surface level stuff that I'm talking about, but I do feel that Jihyun would need to calm down a little and mature a bit too. ^^;;

At the same time, though, she's obviously very friendly and willing to talk to all kinds of people, which I know can be really hard to keep up with -- so good for you!

[mochifaces]

♥ I'm sure you'll be able to do it, seeing as you've got a really good basis for her! Good luck and keep it up!

[wu]

ringback
☆MUSES: turnbacks

idolbook
☆MUSES: soojungs

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)
OK ☑ UNLISTED MUSES

I'm especially worried about Kris' voice, so anything you have would be great.

[wu]

Krystal is very different from any other Krystal I've played with and I mean that in the best way, she seems lots more like the real. She has two very different sides. One where she's obviously trying to put up a tough front and one where you can see the real vulnerable teenage girl come through. I've also never gotten bored or felt the conversation stall talking to her. Keep up whatever you're doing!

[soojungs]

Thank you! I've been playing Krystal for a long time so I have to say I'm pretty confident in her voice, but it's always great to hear that others have the same interpretation as me. I hope we continue having great conversations with your muse!

[drums]

I'm absolutely horrible when it comes to writing critique, so expect this to be a bit rambly.

My muse is kind of sad that they haven't been able to interact one-on-one, through chatting and scenes, though the latter is completely to be expected since Kris is in China. I don't know if we just keep missing each other or something, but I never see Kris online, at least not visibly. They've talked through their own blast though, and through twitter which is good, but we haven't really gotten a chance to delve into their friendship and develop it. But! aside from that which will just be remedied with time, Kris seems similar to the real, from what I've seen. You have that playful/teasing side to him that my muse found really enjoyable in the few talks they have had, yet you've managed to maintain that gentle commanding presence that duizhang has. It's not overbearing and it's not threatening. You're definitely heading in the right direction and I think that with time he'll only get better, so you shouldn't be worried.

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[mochifaces]

You suck. :(

^_^ Just kidding. Sso loves him and I do too. 8( It's hard to get any of BTOB's characterisation down, but I think you're off to a really good start. I especially love how he's kind of charming in the sense that he was 'singing' for the girls, but still playful and got the childish element and all that. And he's cute, okay, even if he keeps telling her that he's not.

[mochifaces]

I do. ;D

Those are definitely words that I'd use to describe him with. I think he's very confident in himself, but still kind of awkward with variety too. I'm really glad that it's Sohyun that gets to play against him, and even more so that it's made things easy for you. ;; He better stick around! ♥

[budaejjigae]

barbuddha
☆MUSES: budaejjigae

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

[budaejjigae]

Thank you! I'm looking forward to the both of them talking to each other more too, because they seem to be really playful with each other ^^