MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: DECEMBER 2011

Dec 10, 2011 01:21

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beauty December 10 2011, 11:26:24 UTC
rakuen-yodan
☆MUSES: icesergeant

idolbook
☆MUSES: candystars

clubhoused
☆MUSES: gyuhyun

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

It's been a while since I've done one of these.

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vocalring December 11 2011, 01:28:57 UTC
Like you mentioned, our muses haven't truly interacted that much, but judging from their comments I am very sure that Byunghee knows he'd get along with Kyuhyun. He's blunt, honest and straight to the point, also confident with himself. I feel that in that sense, they're very much alike. Hopefully they'll be able to chat with each other properly someday in the future!

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zergs December 11 2011, 10:56:39 UTC
I hope that they do get more of a chance to talk! ♥ Let's work on that together. I agree - I feel that they have a lot in common, although a lot of Kyu's confidence is a mask, to be honest. But he always enjoys their comment exchanges. ^_^

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itsyoo December 11 2011, 03:41:14 UTC
Where do we start with Jessica~? Hmmm... Sooyoung loves Jessica, a lot. ♥ I really appreciate on how caring, trusting and loving Jessica is to Sooyoung and how I really wish they become really close in future. :) I gotta be honest that if it weren't for Jessica, Sooyoung might have fallen apart already. ^^; And there's also the tendency for her to worry a lot about Jessica because of what she's been going through now and hates not having much to do about it. But that's okay, I hope it'll be fixed one day. ^^

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beauty December 11 2011, 09:01:22 UTC
omg ;_; You lovely thing. Thank you. I'm sorry Sica stays closed off sometimes. Soo caught her when she'd decided that being icy was the best way of dealing. T_T She'll talk soon, I promise. I'm really looking forward to them being able to talk more. ♥

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boycharms December 11 2011, 05:02:45 UTC
Just wanted to pop in and say that I hope that Jonghyun and Kyuhyun can get closer as time goes on. ♥ Their...altercation was pretty amusing to me, and I liked how they could come down from it and have a pretty serious talk. I know that Jonghyun can be a handful, haha, but I'm hoping they can continue to talk and get a scene in sometime, timezones allowing. ^^ Looking forward to it!

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zergs December 11 2011, 10:59:06 UTC
lmao oh my God some of the things they were saying... when Jonghyun was like "bring it" I nearly fell out of my chair laughing. I like that they manage to be angry each other and yet totally normal at the same time. It feels very realistic to me, due to them both having rather strong tempers. Anyway, Kyuhyun can be a handful too, so it's all good! Really looking forward to more interaction and hopefully a scene as well! ♥

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woon December 11 2011, 07:46:22 UTC
Sica... I'm not sure what to say. I love her to pieces. I think I have given you a lot of crit on her before and its hard to think of anything new at the moment. Umm, based off the last crit, I think you have played up her laziness quite well and its adorable. I think that's about it. There are things Woon gets frustrated with as well, but I don't really think they are very ooc. Yoona thinks she is a little controlling sometimes when it comes to her issues, but she knows Sica is just concerned. Overall, I really love her and I hope Yoona can get closer to her and Woon is hoping they can still stay close. Keep up the good work. ♥

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beauty December 11 2011, 09:07:47 UTC
To be honest, Sica knows she's controlling and she feels terrible about it. But she feels it's the only way she can protect Yoona. :( I really hope they can start to get past that in time. ♥

Thank you, hon. :3

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imyoonie December 12 2011, 03:54:50 UTC
I know! Yoona understands this and she doesn't hate Sica or anything! She gets frustrated because she tries to close off and handle things herself but Sica... refuses to let her. xD She knows she is just trying to help and she has helped a lot, so really don't feel like Yoona dislikes her! ♥ I definitely think they will get closer~

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beauty December 12 2011, 04:00:24 UTC
LMAO that's Jessica. Worrisome ahjumma. T_T

Really looking forward to them getting closer! ♥

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ayo December 12 2011, 00:25:35 UTC
I have to leave something because you left me something and because I adore you to bits and pieces. cute little bits and pieces that I will keep in a box and never get rid of ( ... )

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beauty December 12 2011, 03:59:32 UTC
I wish I could say something more about this oh my god but every time I read it I just get ;_;ish and I give up actually having something to say.

Thank you so much. T____T

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