MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: DECEMBER 2011

[bubblybliss]

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RULES:

☆ Please adhere by the coding associated with each muse(s). If a mun specifies that they only want praise, that does not mean you get to critique them anyway. If we see any kind of abuse, the comments will be deleted. Likewise, if a mun DOES NOT specify what kind of feedback they'd like, their comment will be deleted to avoid

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e.g.

[bubblybliss]

rakuen-yodan
☆MUSES:

[lightpinks]

clubhoused
☆MUSE: lightpinks.

starhighway
☆MUSE: everbrights.

homeless / psl
☆MUSES: iamjuliette. / diswitted.

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

This always happens when I'm on hiatus, but... hahaha! Anything will be appreciated! ♥

[yeors]

Hello, miss! It's been a while. I hope you're doing well with your exams. :3 And for this concrit, I want to talk about Naeun since we've had more interaction between these two more.

She's actually quite the mystery, he has a difficult time pinning down exactly who she is~ but it's the fun in getting to know each other, isn't it? They still need to have that party, and he's looking forward to it whenever you're back! Sungyeol has this impression she's more mature than he is a lot of the time... Sometimes he is more mature for her. Hahaha.

[namuwoo]

From the little interaction we've had with Naeun, we feel like she's a really nice muse. I don't know a lot about A-Pink, sadly, but Woohyun has enjoyed their brief conversations and would definitely like to talk to her more! ♥

[lightpinks]

I worry that your knowledge of the real Krystal is not really in depth. In a kpopwantads post, she called Jonghyun Jonghyun-sshi, when Krystal has stated several times that Jonghyun is her closest celebrity friend and closer than a real brother. Maybe do a little more research?

[molkkang]

IDOLBOOK
☆MUSES: molkkang

CLUBHOUSED
☆MUSES: jumyummie

homeless / psl
☆MUSES: disturbingme / patitocaliente

OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

Finally catching one on time. Yay for working early~

[molkkang]

Generally praises Koki because, I, wow? Like, how do I explain it? First of all IDK if you were ever not confident with him but STOP you should always be confident with him because he's just kind of like all kinds of perfect. You've really got a good grasp of the real and how he's kind of got a whole two sides to him kinda thing.

Plus you're all kinds of fun to scene with when we actually do get to scene when I'm not falling asleep whoops and even just letting them talk is fun 'cause they're really dumb together it's adorable♥ Yeah I know you're wondering why the fuck I'm even anon. OH also creepily observing patitocaliente I approve >:)

[disturbingme]

Admittedly, I still from time to time feel a lack of confidence when playing Koki mostly because he's so damn dynamic and I feel like I lack that quality but I try my best to live up to the real. I think of all my muses, he's the most hard for me to write because his awesome takes more brain power. I do love it when we get to scene, though. One day. One day we will finish one.

And please, if you have any crit for the one your creeping on, let me know. He's really embarrassing right now.

[reclothed]

I'm glad you're back. 8[ It's actually been a damn long time eversince we first scened haha. So uh, let's see what I have to say~

Character Crit:

Eunjung: She's very IC. That's basically it HAHA. Wait wait, I'm still trying to think of something..... I just love her jsyk for god's sake 8( haha

Junhyung: I thought about this the other day, but his characterisation has really really changed, which isn't bad. But when I think back to the first time Hyo and he talked, to the way they were before well, they started walking on different paths haha, a lot has changed. I'm not good at explaining this. Whatever. I hope you get me. haha

General Praise~!
Like always, I love Eunjung and Hyomin. Despite what has happened and stuff, they are still close and that just shows that they are really good friends. I hope they'll grow old together :') hahaha ♥

And just to repeat my tweet. That is your Yuu??? XD

[beauty]

rakuen-yodan
☆MUSES: icesergeant

idolbook
☆MUSES: candystars

clubhoused
☆MUSES: gyuhyun

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

It's been a while since I've done one of these.

[liutard]

With Jia I really missed that spark she used to have. She used to be really energetic and caring about her band members and friends and I didn't got that from her anymore. Granted lots of stuff went on with her so it's understandable. Right now I feel that again with her ^^ She's very bubbly and turning back into the Jia she used to be. I look forward to see more of her and for Amber and her to get closer ♥

[candystars]

Yeah. It was getting really rough there for a while and she needed somewhere new. When even the mun can feel just how uncaring the muse has become, I think it's bad. ^^; I'm so glad though that you can see her coming back to life the same way that I am. ♥ Really looking forward to having more strange chats with Amber!

[liutard]

I know what it's like though! When things get rough it's sometimes hard to get your muse out of it. But I am glad she is coming out of her shell again because she's pretty awesome ♥ I really like how easy it is for Amber to have a conversation with her. It flows naturally and has never felt forced and I love that.

[perfections]

idolbook
☆MUSES: perfections

homeless
☆MUSES: softballad

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)
OK ☑ UNLISTED MUSES

Bringing Victoria around again, so if you have anything you'd like to see in her~ Also, I'd really appreciate it if I could get some solid crit on Taeyeon, she's the strongest she's been in a long time, and I'd like to know if I'm doing this right, haha. Thanks in advance. ♥

Also, if you don't feel comfortable with doing it here, PMs are always welcome!

[reclothed]

I missed writing with you so much. 8( It's really nice and easy to come up with a reply to what you write haha.... and well. The only reason why I don't poke you right now is because I am sure you have to sleep.

We should continue our scene soon, though. ♥

[perfections]

I got caught up in watching dramas! Good thing I only have to work 4 hours today. ^^;

But yes, we will continue if you're still awake when I get home! If not, then next time I catch you around. ♥

ooc.

[apes]

I don't have a whole lot to say but that one comment thread in her journal was really nice. I hope they can talk more in the near future. ♥