MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: DECEMBER 2011

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[ayo]

I have to leave something because you left me something and because I adore you to bits and pieces. cute little bits and pieces that I will keep in a box and never get rid of.

LOOK HERE, MISSY. you already know that I don't like jessica. like, the real. I don't know why but I have never liked her. your jessica, however? the sun rises and sets with her as far as jinki is concerned. she is the sun, the moon, the stars, the rainbow that shows up after a rainstorm, and the peace that settles over him after they've spoken. despite what has happened, or not happened between them, jinki has always wanted her and needed her in his life and I love that you've made her approachable. you've made jessica easy to open up to and trust and even though it took jinki a while to get there, he did get there, and that's all that matters. she has a real personality, she isn't two-dimensional, and I like that she has depth beyond her looks or her singing ability. she feels real and jinki will never let go of her.

as far as writing goes, I don't think we've had the chance to scene as much as I'd like to. the most recent was such a sad scene and they need more happy memories. the actual writing, though, is easy to read and follow and it's always a good length and you're just awesome. I hope our kids can hang out more in the future, and not just when they need a shoulder to cry on haha because I think they can be even closer. best best friends. he would love that.

I can't really say much about kyuhyun because, like we've said, they don't talk much! but I do want their kyuline to be active and as close to the reals as possible. I think it'd be so cute to have. minho loves his hyungdeul~

and I love you~ so keep up the good work ♥

[beauty]

I wish I could say something more about this oh my god but every time I read it I just get ;_;ish and I give up actually having something to say.

Thank you so much. T____T