MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: OCTOBER 2013

Oct 07, 2013 18:38

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j_taekwoon October 7 2013, 15:54:35 UTC
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OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

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pabo October 8 2013, 23:26:45 UTC
Just want to say that I love your Leo! We'll ignore the fact that he's the only Leo we've ever interacted with. :D;; I think he exudes the aura that the real has - quiet, softspoken, only speaks when he feels it's important to. The things he does and says, I can definitely see the real doing and saying!

I also enjoyed the scenes that we were able to do and I really enjoy your writing, because it's a good mix of description and narration and whatnot and your tags always gives me something to reply to! I was just a little sad when we didn't finish the other one - I think either you hadn't gotten my reply, or I didn't get yours, and we kinda just... didn't mention it again after that orz. Which isn't anyone's fault! I'm just awkward. D:

But other than that, A+ with Leo! He's awesomesauce, and we have a soft spot for him. u__u

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j_taekwoon October 10 2013, 19:21:36 UTC
Thank you so much! I have a tendency to get wordy when I talk personally, so I end up having to edit a lot when I play Leo and that has to be at least half the reason for why it takes me as long as it does to post with him, haha. I'm really happy to hear that he comes out that way ^^

I can be a little bit awkward about picking scenes back up too, and since AIM eats posts sometimes it's difficult ^^;; Let's work together at being better about it! Taekwoon really enjoys spending time with Yura too and the scenes seem to flow well from our end as well.

Thank you again ^^

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pabo October 10 2013, 23:26:56 UTC
I can imagine how hard it is to play a pretty quiet/shy muse when you're normally a talkative/chatty person, so I think you're doing a really good job with him! And yes, I'll definitely try and be less awkward if we scene again anytime soon. :) Keep up the good work!

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