MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: OCTOBER 2013

[bubblybliss]

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[bubblybliss]

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IDOLBOOK
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CLOUDAPP
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☆MUSES: bubblybliss / bubblybliss

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[totterings]

Mucore
☆MUSES: totterings

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[totterings]

Onews are rare so A+ for playing one.
He comes off nice enough for the most part and is easy to approach on a shallow level. In my experience he has a rough edge to him however, where he comes off suddenly rude out of left field in the middle of a normal friendly conversation. He also comes off very significant other-centric and did create drama around that before he was settled in with his current SO.
That left me and muse with a very bad impression initially. My advice is to try to play him less inconsiderately and bring out the positive qualities of the real, in game. He has the potential to be very welcoming and engaging which is a great characteristic to have across the board, I just hope you extend that to a more genuine level in the muse.

[totterings]

Thank you for your comment, but it would be very helpful to improving him if you could be more specific, because I wasn't made aware of any drama and he has no SO for you to be speaking of. If you could reply, I would be very grateful. ^^

[vocals]

You already know how I feel about him, so I won't make you waste time reading through it again. ♥ I guess the only thing I can really say critique wise is that I hope we get the chance to scene more (I think a lot of this is because of our conflicting schedules) and that I hope I get the chance to see his 'leader' side more often in the future. There hasn't really been a need for his peace keeping skills just yet, but I hope it does come in to play in the future!

[budaejjigae]

kakaotalk
☆MUSES: budaejjigae

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[colorsigns]

I think I gave you crit before but I don't really remember... and if so it's been months.. so here we go! :)

First of all, I'm really happy how their friendships seems to be so constant. Like, it's not even an rp thing, that just happens all the time in ~real life~ too, the falling out of friendship thing, but with Bomi and Eunji it's just... there. Even if we (they) don't catch each other online for a few days or weeks, once they talk it doesn't feel like anything has changed.. IF anything, they've only gotten closer, especially last month! So all in all their friendship feels really organic and not forced @.@. Like 'They are APink members, we have to make sure they are close!!! >:|'.. the friendship just happened? I don't knowCharacter wise your muse has yet to say something that would struck me as OOC. There really hasn't been anything like that at all. Your Bomi is the whole package. She's childish, but has her mature moments and sometimes she's insecure, which is an important detail I think. @.@ Which your muse is hiding like

[budaejjigae]

asdkhfsalkdf thank you ;; It took me quite a while to get her voice down, and I'm glad she hasn't scared you off yet lmao Your Eunji's really IC too, in the sense that she brings out the best in Bomi...? I feel like Bomi gains a lot of confidence from her, and that's the reason she's come to be a little more outgoing too hehe Thank you for your crit, and thank you for playing Eunji so well that it's helped Bomi grow along the way too. No matter what others say, I do think that your Eunji's one of the best I've ever played with, so thank you ♥

[colorsigns]

Thank you for saying this! :< ♥

[j_taekwoon]

Cloudapp
☆MUSES: j-taekwoon

OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
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[pabo]

Just want to say that I love your Leo! We'll ignore the fact that he's the only Leo we've ever interacted with. :D;; I think he exudes the aura that the real has - quiet, softspoken, only speaks when he feels it's important to. The things he does and says, I can definitely see the real doing and saying!

I also enjoyed the scenes that we were able to do and I really enjoy your writing, because it's a good mix of description and narration and whatnot and your tags always gives me something to reply to! I was just a little sad when we didn't finish the other one - I think either you hadn't gotten my reply, or I didn't get yours, and we kinda just... didn't mention it again after that orz. Which isn't anyone's fault! I'm just awkward. D:

But other than that, A+ with Leo! He's awesomesauce, and we have a soft spot for him. u__u

[j_taekwoon]

Thank you so much! I have a tendency to get wordy when I talk personally, so I end up having to edit a lot when I play Leo and that has to be at least half the reason for why it takes me as long as it does to post with him, haha. I'm really happy to hear that he comes out that way ^^

I can be a little bit awkward about picking scenes back up too, and since AIM eats posts sometimes it's difficult ^^;; Let's work together at being better about it! Taekwoon really enjoys spending time with Yura too and the scenes seem to flow well from our end as well.

Thank you again ^^

[pabo]

I can imagine how hard it is to play a pretty quiet/shy muse when you're normally a talkative/chatty person, so I think you're doing a really good job with him! And yes, I'll definitely try and be less awkward if we scene again anytime soon. :) Keep up the good work!

[vocals]

MUCORE
☆MUSES: vocals

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[totterings]

I will keep things simple, too~ Though I don't believe I could make my love for Jonghyun any clearer, or more obvious. ♥ I still marvel at their easy chemistry, and it is hard not to gush over him but I will do my best! I think you play him wonderfully, touching on everything (perfection and imperfection), and no one has been able to miss his charm. He has the same feeling that I imagine the real has on the people around him, where people want to be close to him and important to him, and there are too many factors that go into that for me to lay out. My Jinki wouldn't be Jinki if it hadn't been your Jonghyun we began playing with! I wish I had something to leave for you to think about, but nothing is coming to mind... I will let you know if something comes to me~