MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: OCTOBER 2013

[bubblybliss]

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[totterings]

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OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

[totterings]

Onews are rare so A+ for playing one.
He comes off nice enough for the most part and is easy to approach on a shallow level. In my experience he has a rough edge to him however, where he comes off suddenly rude out of left field in the middle of a normal friendly conversation. He also comes off very significant other-centric and did create drama around that before he was settled in with his current SO.
That left me and muse with a very bad impression initially. My advice is to try to play him less inconsiderately and bring out the positive qualities of the real, in game. He has the potential to be very welcoming and engaging which is a great characteristic to have across the board, I just hope you extend that to a more genuine level in the muse.

[totterings]

Thank you for your comment, but it would be very helpful to improving him if you could be more specific, because I wasn't made aware of any drama and he has no SO for you to be speaking of. If you could reply, I would be very grateful. ^^

[vocals]

You already know how I feel about him, so I won't make you waste time reading through it again. ♥ I guess the only thing I can really say critique wise is that I hope we get the chance to scene more (I think a lot of this is because of our conflicting schedules) and that I hope I get the chance to see his 'leader' side more often in the future. There hasn't really been a need for his peace keeping skills just yet, but I hope it does come in to play in the future!

[totterings]

You don't mean to say that nothing has changed since the last critique, do you?! ♥ Thank you~ I would really like to scene more, especially after the spectacular failure I made of their thread. For leadership, I am glad that not very much has come up where he needed to be the serious sort of leader. He has had a few times where he has had to, but they were kept between him and the person involved and there were not so many that I can't count them on one hand. Unless Jonghyun plans to make a mess of things in the future, it may not be something you really see, but I will always welcome more opportunities for Jinki to be serious~