MUSE ☆ PRAISE ☆ AND ☆ CRITIQUE: OCTOBER 2013

Oct 07, 2013 18:38

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budaejjigae October 7 2013, 14:28:07 UTC
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OK ☑ GENERAL PRAISE
OK ☑ CHARACTER CRIT
OK ☑ WRITING CRIT (ANY)

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colorsigns October 7 2013, 16:13:07 UTC
I think I gave you crit before but I don't really remember... and if so it's been months.. so here we go! :)

First of all, I'm really happy how their friendships seems to be so constant. Like, it's not even an rp thing, that just happens all the time in ~real life~ too, the falling out of friendship thing, but with Bomi and Eunji it's just... there. Even if we (they) don't catch each other online for a few days or weeks, once they talk it doesn't feel like anything has changed.. IF anything, they've only gotten closer, especially last month! So all in all their friendship feels really organic and not forced @.@. Like 'They are APink members, we have to make sure they are close!!! >:|'.. the friendship just happened? I don't knowCharacter wise your muse has yet to say something that would struck me as OOC. There really hasn't been anything like that at all. Your Bomi is the whole package. She's childish, but has her mature moments and sometimes she's insecure, which is an important detail I think. @.@ Which your muse is hiding like ( ... )

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budaejjigae October 8 2013, 13:10:39 UTC
asdkhfsalkdf thank you ;; It took me quite a while to get her voice down, and I'm glad she hasn't scared you off yet lmao Your Eunji's really IC too, in the sense that she brings out the best in Bomi...? I feel like Bomi gains a lot of confidence from her, and that's the reason she's come to be a little more outgoing too hehe Thank you for your crit, and thank you for playing Eunji so well that it's helped Bomi grow along the way too. No matter what others say, I do think that your Eunji's one of the best I've ever played with, so thank you ♥

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colorsigns October 8 2013, 19:34:45 UTC
Thank you for saying this! :< ♥

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itamitower October 8 2013, 19:53:57 UTC
I don't have any crit to offer and this is going to be very short, haha. I remember interacting briefly with her with another muse of mine and I just wanted to say that in both experience your Bomi's very pleasant to talk to. She seems genuinely interested in others and I think that's IC of her. I think she's a solid muse all in all, thumbs up for playing her!

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budaejjigae October 9 2013, 14:19:08 UTC
Ah, thank you! Sometimes she may run out of things to say so I'm glad the conversations didn't go stale or anything...^^ Thank you again! ♥

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