fic: you've slipped away like a fistful of sand

[brutalsong]

you've slipped away like a fistful of sand
tsn. mark/eduardo. there are no happy endings, because life goes on after the hero kisses the girl.

Comments

[brutalsong]

you always leave such awesome reviews and it's like you can read my brain and understand what i very poorly try to say. ♥

NO NO NO
IT IS YOUR TURN TO WRITE AND I WILL WITHHOLD ANY OTHER STORIES IN THE MAKING FROM HERE ON OUT UNTIL YOU WRITE ABOUT COLLEGE ERA OR POST MOVIE OR WHATEVER MARK AND EDUARDO EATING FRITOS WATCHING SHARK WEEK AND SITTING ON PILES OF NOTES FOR FINALS. I DONT CARE. WRITE ABOUT ANYTHING AND I WILL READ IT AND SMILE EVEN WHEN IT'S DOOMED LOVE.

MAKE IT HAPPEN SO THAT I CAN GET THE ENERGY TO WRITE MEXICO FIC.
DO IT COME ON I'LL TALK ALL THE META YOU WANT AND THEN YOU CAN TURN IT INTO PRETTY FIC.

[dansaires]

first off i'm gonna have to reread this in the morning
cause im sure ill understand it better sober, and fed.

second, girllll. why do these rich people eat shit like
salmon and salad. to make the events better they should
serve hot pockets and cheetos. everyone loves those.

third, and actually about the fic i guess,
KISSING IN THE RAIN AFTER THE "LEAFT BEHIND" SCENE IS CANON.
the filmmakers just didn't film it for us to enjoy
but there was to much angst and tension for there not to
have been at least one kiss ffs. soy pendeja pero no soy way.

and ughhh their conversation at the bar is so awkward i wanted
to cover my face with a blanket while i read it.
mark is all "we can go back to being in love"
and wardo is all lol no bitch.

basically i love it all and omg my bro just got here with snacks
ilu honeybun now finish my hipster fic!!!!!!!!

[brutalsong]

YOU YOU YOU

IF ONLY THEY SERVED HOT POCKETS AND CHEETOS THEN MARK AND EDUARDO COULD BOND OVER IT AND IT WOULD BE ALL LIKE WHEN WARDO SAID REMEMBER THE ALGORITHM? EXCEPT MARK WOULD BE ALL REMEMBER WHEN YOU BURNT YOUR TONGUE WITH A HOT POCKET AND I TOLD YOU TO CALL THE HOTLINE AND THREATENED TO SUE THEM AND YOU SAID NO YOU WOULDNT SUE ANYONE BUT THEN YOU SUED ME? AND THEN THEY WOULD LAUGH AND EVERYTHING WOULD BE PERFECT AND THEY KISS AND HAVE SWEET BRAZILIAN SEX. YES

i will eventually finish it omg why is it so hard to write about hipster people being hipster and blondie not being all necro hahahah what is life MASTERSHAKE TAKE THE WHEEL!

[learnthemusic]

Oh, gosh, I don't even know what to say about this. This is so wonderfully written and so - just - GUH. I love the flashbacks and the way Eduardo handles Mark and all the talking Mark does and it's just so GOOD.

THIS IS SO AMAZING. ♥

[brutalsong]

gosh, you are so nice!
glad you liked it :)

[thisissirius]

oh wow. this hurts in the best way possible but OH GOD. everything about this, the flashbacks and the talking and the way they interact NOW, it's all so perfect.

[brutalsong]

one day. one day i will write a happy ending! hahaha

♥

[zeraparker]

I love this, you worked the flash backs in very well, it's a great construction and works really godo with the particular scenes you chose. Great job!

[brutalsong]

ahhh thank you so much! i'm glad the flashbacks worked well :D