fic: you've slipped away like a fistful of sand

[brutalsong]

you've slipped away like a fistful of sand
tsn. mark/eduardo. there are no happy endings, because life goes on after the hero kisses the girl.

Comments

[aurora_84]

*SOBS ON YOUR SHOULDER*

Dude, why are you so amazing at making my soul ache, why?? The rain kissing scene is so much more than I expected, and so much more painful too. And then that very last bit just destroyed all the still-intact parts of my heart.

Um, this is a very pathos-filled way to say OMG THANK YOU FOR WRITING THE RAIN FIC. 3

[brutalsong]

GAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!! ONE DAY! ONE DAY THEY WILL BE HAPPY TOGETHER AND DO DOMESTIC BILLIONAIRE THINGS.

but i'm glad you liked it :D

[garnetice]

That was so much heartbreak on one page I can't even process it. I think I possibly forgot to breathe after the rain part and then the love once= loved always and I possibly am still not breathing quite right because this sentence isn't ending the way sentences are supposed to, which I totally contribute to my lack of oxygen. I think the best stories are the ones that give you happy after your hurt like you've been punched in the gut and the happy hurts even more because you know it's not actually going to stay happy and- seriously. Fantastic. Just achingly beautiful and fantastic.

[brutalsong]

omg your lovely words, i dont deserve them!
thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it ♥

[skyearth85]

you have just broken my heart ç____________________ç

[brutalsong]

:(
i saweeh!!!!!
but you know eduardo ran after mark's car at the end ;)

[ginevrawp]

I love this as much as when you first told me about the basic plot (if not even more now).

[brutalsong]

[sakuramar]

I love this but my heart is breack but i love it very much

[brutalsong]

thanks for reading :)