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brenda79

Responsibilities - House MD fanfic

Oct 07, 2007 11:05

Title: Responsibilities
Rating: G
Pairing: Wilson/Julie with some possibly one sided House/Wilson
Warning: Nothing. Pretty angsty I think.
Summary: Wilson's late for Dinner, and Julie is upset. She asks him about his responsibilities.
Note: My first House fic. Idea from
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wilson, fanfic, house md

Comments 8

xjessica_faithx October 7 2007, 18:31:04 UTC

Oh thats a lovely first fic!
I can't wait to read more from you.

brenda79 October 7 2007, 21:23:03 UTC

I'm glad to know I didn't crack up the first time. :) Thank you for the comment.

pengueehime October 7 2007, 23:24:44 UTC

Wait, why would Julie be calling him Wilson?
"I can't believe that Wilson. I'm actually beginning to think that you weren't even with a patient.

brenda79 October 8 2007, 17:39:15 UTC

My mistake. Thanks for pointing that out.

ilovedoyle October 8 2007, 07:02:20 UTC

I think thats a really great piece!

The only thing I'd like to suggest is that you possibly space it out a bit more - leaving a line between paragraphs? Makes it so much easier to read!

Well done! Cannot wait to read more from you!

brenda79 October 8 2007, 17:40:10 UTC

Thank you, and you're right, it does need to be spaced out more.

aragon_san October 8 2007, 20:17:37 UTC

I liked it. It sounded very true to live as far as such situations go imo: the apathy, the frustrations, the endless cycle of arguments ( ... )

brenda79 October 13 2007, 15:57:53 UTC

Yes that's exactly what I wanted the point to be, thank you. I wanted to show the frustration of what was going on with their marriage, and also how much Wilson wanted to deny what he was feeling.

I've never paid much attention to Julie, so I can't say I hate her, but I thought that she deserved to be upset, even if she did end up cheating on Wilson.

I was almost close to making House being the reason for Wilson's lateness, but then I thought that wouldn't be fair. It's true that House is annoying, but it can't always be his fault. I'm sure Wilson has messed up plenty of times, so he doesn't need House to forget things.
They are both adults, and are able to choose for themselves. Even though Wilson does go along with a lot of crazy things House does, he does it because he chooses too. House doesn't control him.