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bottleinmyboot

[English/Anglais] Bloody English

May 13, 2010 18:40

Title : Bloody English
Author : maikichelorrain
Character(s) and/or pairing(s): fem!France/Scotland, mention of privateer !England
Rating: NC-17
Warning : Sex, blood. At the same time. And Classical French.
Summary : 1589. Scotland knew it was a bad idea to come, but since his king asked him to accompany the English troops in France, how could he refuse?

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mature, c : écosse, f : hetalia, c : femme!france, échange, anglais/english, c : angleterre

Comments 12

futuresimple May 13 2010, 20:49:19 UTC

nngggghhh thisssss /BRB BEING INCOHERENT
Your France is always so effing French adshkjlsd Goddd, i love your fics.

I love your icon <3 bottleinmyboot May 13 2010, 22:08:01 UTC

Thank you!

I'm happy I manage to get Francis in character ~

materia_indigo May 14 2010, 12:27:35 UTC

The light gray text on a white background is difficult to read, especially with this small font. You may want to try a different layout if you're going to post fanfic.

bottleinmyboot May 14 2010, 15:54:40 UTC

Thank you for letting me know.
I've no problems with the color of the text, so I should see if it is really this bothersome.
If it is, I'll change it, no problem :)

candelaria May 14 2010, 15:32:40 UTC

ohgod I suddenly ship Scotland/fem!France with the fire of a thousand suns now hnngh. They're so good together.

She's so beautiful and classy and manipulative and I don't blame you for falling as hard as you did Scotland, truly. And it's probably a silly thing to mention but I liked that her breasts were smaller, because in my headcanon fem!France doesn't really have big boobs at all, unlike a lot of fanart. |D

The poetry was so hot. And there was a time in Scotland when French was classy and all the cool kids spoke it so that made things even better. I love how much of a man he is omg, I don't even know. You do a wonderful Scotland. <3 ( ... )

bottleinmyboot May 14 2010, 16:22:12 UTC

I don't blame Scotland either, because deciphering what runs through France's mind is just... hard, if not impossible. It was genuine at first, I don't think she planned to sleep with him when she saw him, but then he spoke French and OMG, British people speaking French is just too hot, and he was so tense... France couldn't resist >D ( ... )

candelaria May 14 2010, 17:22:06 UTC

France's mind is like a steel trap, you can't really get in unless you're let in. His French is probably heavily accented but somewhat still hot because he's trying; though I think if you asked him to speak French these days it would sound terribly archaic haha. I don't blame her, he's awful fun to seduce. >D ( ... )

bottleinmyboot May 15 2010, 00:00:32 UTC

I'm sure Scotland would be as hot as he was in the past, even if his French is a bit rusty. Maybe a little cuter, searching for his words and being extra extra polite, and being a bit frustrated because he can't remember. France should take the opportunity to teach him some stuff.

Long long legs O3O (my god, France teaching Scotland the name of the body parts in French. Or something like that; I think I've seen a fic labout this subject with a fem!Arthur). I'm sure she has a foot fetish >>

He's like the perfect man in a way, isn't he? Very masculine, grumpy, shy about his feelings but caring, loving and supportive. And not macho (or he just fails at being one)

I guess people avoided to have sex during the woman's period. After all, intercourse's only goal was to procreate, pleasure was just an option.
But in a way... that doesn't fit France to repress her sexual activity because of the Church prescriptions. And god, yes, Scotland, you like it rough <3 ( ... )

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nenamoo June 10 2010, 11:28:45 UTC

o.o

The French kills me. In a good way! So shkfkhdfshjshjs! Oh Francis, exactly the same no matter which gender you are XD

bottleinmyboot June 10 2010, 12:44:22 UTC

/resurrects

Thank you :)