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Fire and Ice - Chapter 21

Feb 15, 2008 22:17

Thanks for waiting for so long for this update. - C

Pairing: Ennis/Jack

Setting: AU/AU

Rating: NC-17 for the whole story

Disclaimer: The characters of Ennis and Jack belong to the fabulously talented Annie Proulx. No disrespect is intended. Any OCs are mine.

Summary: Ennis del Mar is a defenseman and Jack Twist a left wing on a minor-league hockey team ( Read more... )

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Comments 15

trekfan February 18 2008, 16:54:32 UTC

Hey Carol,

I love this part. But what the hell is Ennis trying to do? You can't have a relationship unless you can be honest. What does he expect to do just walk away from Jack? Destroy the both of them?

Please let them be together :( sniff

Poor Ennis! george66 February 18 2008, 23:06:09 UTC

Yes - I said poor Ennis. Unlike others I'm not ready to kick him in his teeth. Knowing his nature its perfectly understandable that he is reacting the way in which he is doing ( ... )

birdoparadise February 19 2008, 23:32:43 UTC

This is killing me. This is what happens when you don't talk. All the conversation takes place in your head with no outside input to change the direction of your (negative) thinking. Unfortunately, this is perfectly normal for most people and why we end up in such messes. Talk, talk talk, and don't let your emotions do your thinking for you.

*Sigh.* Do you think Ennis heard me?

samtyr February 20 2008, 17:20:20 UTC

Heh, just realised I missed this chapter. Ooops, my bad, sorry. ::is very very embarassed:: This was really good and even though I know all relationships can't be 100%, I was hoping that things would let them have a breather.

blackbird_y October 13 2012, 03:43:32 UTC

Just like in bbm I'll never understand how Ennis could think that being apart was saver than being together... Oh man... :(

Nev