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FIC: Structural Flaws

Aug 03, 2009 15:41

Title: Structural Flaws
Author: blue_fjords
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairing: Suzie/Ianto
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Word length: ~1800
Summary: Set several years pre-series. Suzie has a tryst with a boy with a fake name. They are briefly interrupted.

A/N: This is totes PWP, and totes for amand_r and used_songs, who suggested and seconded it over on the what-the- ( Read more... )

pwp, tw: ianto, tw: suzie, fic

Comments 38

adjovi August 3 2009, 22:29:07 UTC

oh!! oh!! claps happily! this is awesome. i just love your suzie--pretty much exactly how i see her.

Suzie rolled her eyes. “Boy. Fuck first, story time later. Your blood’s already up.”

i can totally see her saying that. wonderful stuff!

blue_fjords August 4 2009, 05:06:24 UTC

Suzie!!! I really do love to write Suzie. I'm glad we sync up on the Suzie.

topgeargirl2 August 4 2009, 05:32:39 UTC

This was very good.

Suzie was always a very interesting character.

blue_fjords August 5 2009, 04:14:13 UTC

Thanks! I really like getting my ya-ya's out through writing some Suzie. :)

topgeargirl2 August 5 2009, 06:08:15 UTC

I've been thinking of writing a story with Suzie in it.

blue_fjords August 5 2009, 12:13:42 UTC

You should totes do it! Suzie is a fascinating character to play with; there's a lot of wiggle room. And she has a very unique perspective.

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kel_reiley August 4 2009, 05:45:06 UTC

HOLY HELL!
that was amazing
SUZIE!

blue_fjords August 5 2009, 04:12:58 UTC

Aww, kel, you make me happy camper on bad day. You're a right little ray of sunshine, you are.

(Yay, Suzie!)

kel_reiley August 5 2009, 04:48:50 UTC

i read the meme, it brought me down :(

fide_et_spe August 7 2009, 15:51:23 UTC

Oh this is rather delicious in an evil way. I do love your Suzie, and I like how you make it work with canon. Retcon is very handy for that of course.

Glad to see it's all fluffy and romantic, very nice.

blue_fjords August 8 2009, 22:15:39 UTC

Retcon is TW's answer to "Oh, shit! We dropped that storyline and totally flubbed the character development!" (I kid b/c I love.)

You meant a "not" in that last sentence, right? Or maybe this *is* fluffy!

fide_et_spe August 9 2009, 07:33:07 UTC

Hi well sometimes I am not sure about retcon as it is a bit close to a date rape idea, taking people's memories without their permission, but equally it is a good plot device and also they do have a very ruthless, immoral side, which fits.

I was just being silly and joking about the fluff! (I did think it was lame when I typed it to be honest. )

blue_fjords August 11 2009, 01:34:30 UTC

Retcon gives me the heebie jeebies!

And I totally <3 you, fide!

thrace_adams August 10 2009, 13:04:36 UTC

OH very interesting and hot as well. Not a pairing I would normally read, but it was so you so I did :) Well done.

blue_fjords August 11 2009, 01:36:16 UTC

Yeah, I got "Suzie/Ianto" as the prompt and thought, "How the hell am I going to fit this into my romantic J/I mindset?" And I went wicked early into the backstory! Thanks for taking a chance on it!