FIC: Structural Flaws

[blue_fjords]

Title: Structural Flaws
Author: blue_fjords
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairing: Suzie/Ianto
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Word length: ~1800
Summary: Set several years pre-series. Suzie has a tryst with a boy with a fake name. They are briefly interrupted.

A/N: This is totes PWP, and totes for amand_r and used_songs, who suggested and seconded it over on the what-the-

Comments

[verasteine]

Finally got around to reading this, and wow. You are gifted. I love your Suzie, and young Ianto, and this line:

He didn’t know what he was doing, not really, and she spared an exasperated thought for the unimaginative former girlfriends of not-Ifan before seizing his head and directing him.

Yes, yes, yes. I love Ianto snark and Suzie thoughts. Fab job. This totally happened.

[blue_fjords]

*grin* Thanks, vera! You know how I feel about Suzie. And that line seems to resonate w/ people, for some reason. :)

So glad you liked it!

[elliptic_eye]

I first read this a few weeks back but never commented, because I'm fail like that. But basically, dom!Suzie = hot like burning, and I loved all the details here (especially the reappearance of Suzie's handbag). Anyway, loved this and have recced it over on three_settings.

[blue_fjords]

Oh, awesome! Thanks so much for the rec. :)
The devil's in the details, so I'm glad they stood out to you.

[thady]

When I recced Torchwood for crack_van the last time I knew I wanted to rec this story. Time got away with me. This turn I chose to rec this story first thing, because it should be read far more widely. I was almost ashamed that I didn't leave feedback before.

This is such a fascinating look on both Suzie and Ianto. I love how we see him through her eyes, and how Suzie already uses retcon to cover up. I think even more than the glove retcon was her addiction. Action and conversations without consequences.

[blue_fjords]

Thank you so much! I love, love, love Suzie stories. I like showing her so action-oriented, in addition to the ever-whirling machinations going on in her brain. And I always wanted to do something w/ that huge building!

Thanks again for the rec!

[missyvortexdv]

Awesome look into Suzies mind.

[blue_fjords]

Thanks! Suzie is so much fun to write!