Nothing Hurts More Than A Smile

[blackprince_85]

Title: Nothing Hurts More Than a Smile
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/Focus: Jonghyun/Onew and side! Minho/Onew
Summary: It hurts Jonghyun to see Onew’s smile
A/n: Failed angst...

Comments

[juliiyy]

Woah... that was heartbreaking. Really beautiful, but heartbreaking. I loved how Jonghyun is there for Jinki, even if he can't save him from this hell. I don't think it was a fail angst, really, that was very good. Keep working :)

[blackprince_85]

Thanks a lot for the encouragement :D
I will try writing more..
Actually someone gave me the courage to write this fic...
thanks for reading :)

[hikaritsubasa]

i can't stop myself from calling Jonghyun Jinki's knight!!!
hope you make a squel so that Jonghyun can take Jinki away from misery!!!

[blackprince_85]

He sure is in the fic.
I tried my best to portray it as his knight but somehow failed to protect onew...
thanks a lot for dropping by a comment.

[jennylynn_15]

this. breaks my heart ;~~~~~;
WHY POOR DUBU ILU OMG NOOOOOOESSSSSSSSSS *sniff*
very well writen. omg. idek. ♥♥♥ love ya for writin this even though its sad as hell ;~; ♥

[blackprince_85]

I guess I manage to portray a sad feeling ;)
Just want to bring out to people that there are a lot of people with broken family, children are suffering...
like how Onew situation
thanks a lot for the compliment.
I will try writing more fanfic

[rokkugomarhemal]

love it! Please make the squel of this!!please...please..it hurts my heart!jinki,be strong..jonghyun's with you

[blackprince_85]

I don't know if I will be able to make the sequel as good as this.
Actually I did this to just share that there are a lot of broken family out there with children suffering the same fate as the story...
thanks a lot for droping by..

[kryingtinsel]

that was so... so very touching.. i enjoyed this a lot. it was written well too!

[blackprince_85]

thanks for the compliment...
someone gave me encouragement to post...
i didn't think it will turn out well
thanks for dropping by