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When a Nerd falls for a Jock

Dec 23, 2011 19:02

Title: When a nerd falls for a jock...
Author:black_wind123
Chapter: 12/??
Genre: High school AU, Romance, Friendship,Fluff, Angst...
Warning(s): Bullying, Rape
Rating: PG-13 to NC-17
Pairing(s): JongYu (main), 2min, EunHae, YooSu, slight OnKey, Bff!OnTae, Bff!KeyJongHo
Summary: Jinki was living his life happily as a nerd when suddenly the unexpected ( Read more... )

jonghyun/onew, shinee

Comments 19

snhiromi December 24 2011, 01:53:07 UTC

I suscribed in AFF but i like commenting here :P
Poor Taemin *sigh*
I think Jinki needs to tell Taemin the truth, they are bestfriends u_u
Jonghyun really doesn't remember?? i don't think so... well i hope he remembers coz that is more like a living hell to Jinki right? XD

Merry Christmas to you ^^

black_wind123 December 30 2011, 14:19:55 UTC

Aww thanks for being kind enough to leave a comment here!! :)

He should, shouldn't he? But he's stubborn like that. :/ It's good that Jonghyun doesn't remember cause who knows what he will do to Jinki if he did remember. o.O

Thanks for reading and commenting! ;)

thpeekaboo December 24 2011, 03:57:25 UTC

SPOT SPOT ><

thpeekaboo December 24 2011, 04:05:25 UTC

Jinki knows if he is going to say sorry, he will have to explain the bruises on his face too. So after much thinking, he comes up with this amazing plan. He decides to tell Taemin that he did indeed see Jonghyun on the way back to him room and got beaten up which was the cause of the bruises. He thinks this way, he wouldn't be completely lying since he did meet Jonghyun, and the secret can be kept safe with him. NU-UH JINKI. Tell Taemin the truth! Dx have a tight hug with him and cry together! Then you'll feel better T^T;; and ayee, D: I wonder if the memory will suddenly come knocking on Jjong's mind in the future and let him feel guitly or whatever B| He punched Jinki! He had the guts to after doing such things to him?! ;___; //pinches him xD ( ... )

black_wind123 December 30 2011, 14:32:09 UTC

I agree, that's what he should have done! Ooh, I like the way you think. Clever ;) But it's Jonghyun we're talking about. You think guilty is what he's going to feel if the memories are going to come back :P

Thank you!! I'm glad you think so. Taemin can't stay angry at Jinki. LOL, Heechul kind of is Taemin's mother figure :D

thpeekaboo December 30 2011, 14:38:20 UTC

xDD Surprisingly someone said my way of thinking is clever after I've been called as a dumbo for my whole sixteen years of life ;~; //bricked. XDD --- D: don't tell me he's gonna cackle with like "Heh you're just someone who I----" oh no. Dx //bricked

xD heechul is almost like a mother figure anywhere too, i mean to dongsaengs that he favor XDD

Thread 5

trinkdufreak December 24 2011, 10:05:19 UTC

mmmmm was that dissapointment for a split second with Jinki when Jonghyun didn't recall anything??? o.o
mebe i am over analyzing >.< silly me!
bahahaha cheesy OnTae is fun though! i like Taemin's whole speech and how the whole damn day's events were all Jinki's fault! funny kid!
greeeeatness as usual! look forward to the next chapter! *secret handshake*

black_wind123 December 30 2011, 14:40:51 UTC

May beeeee... But I would say it was anger. Because it's not time yet for him to start liking Jjong. You can't fall in love with your bully and rapist just like that! Especially not when they're the same sex as you! o.o It'll take time...

I'm glad you think so, Hidden Dragon X'D *handshakes back grinning*

I'll try not to keep you waiting for long!

theyaoiwildcard December 24 2011, 10:13:26 UTC

SPOT I TAKE THIS SPOT

*will be back to read this, must go sleep now =A=*

theyaoiwildcard December 26 2011, 01:01:15 UTC

CAN I PUNCH JJONG NOW HUH CAN I!?!?!!? ;A; He has the nerve to punch Jinki bb after all that he did? I don't care if he doesn't remember >.< And I wish he did remember so he would at least feel some kind of something when looking at Jinki. And I just realized he would probably just smirk if he did remember. ;~; I wish to deliver to his face the most righteous of punches (and to his crotch the highest of kicks) :D ( ... )

black_wind123 December 30 2011, 14:55:22 UTC

YEAH YOU CAN!! LET'S GO PUNCH HIM IN THE FACE LIKE RIGHT NOW!! >__< LOL, you're this angry at him for punching Jinki when he doesn't remember anything. Imagine if he actually does. Well, does he? XD (ooh that's too harsh bb. I still want him in my story remember?)

LOL, I never thought I would be the one to write OnTae like this cause I've never been a fan of OnTae in the first place. But I'm happy you like them dongsaengie :] He would only if he could. The way Jonghyun is treating him is already this horrible when he isn't even doing anything so what will happen if he actually tried to fight back? :o

Aww, thank you <3 <3 <3 Haha, that's exactly what I wanted. I obviously don't want my story to be too predictable. Where's the fun in that? I won't keep you waiting for very long bb!!! <33

theyaoiwildcard December 31 2011, 02:09:32 UTC

AWRIGHT I'M GONNA GO DO IT!! >:@ LOL if he does then... I will kick him where he holds dear and it WILL, like, hurt. Fo'sho :D I BET HE DOES...n't LAWL. XD (lmao it is not unniebb. He will still be in your story, just in the hospital in your story TROLLOLOLOLOLAWL)

XD I was never a fan of OnTae either, but as you get into the fandom.... lawl. Oh unnie of course I like them my biases being all cuddly, what's not to like? plus they so cute ;A; I knew he'd kick Jjong's dino butt (if he could) ... I bet it wouldn't be much worse, the cafeteria would just be a huge mess is all~ :D

:DDD Good thing then huh :D The fun would be in the fortune telling, I could TELL you where YOUR story was going LOL I know you won't bb~!! <3<3<3

ziazahra December 24 2011, 14:41:58 UTC

SPPPPPPOOOT!!! BRB GONNA HAVE TO SLEEP NOWW >___<

ziazahra December 27 2011, 02:03:32 UTC

I'm so sorry I couldn't comment earlier because it was Christmas. You know how busy it gets here. But I swear I typed up this long ass comment the other day but I nearly got caught by my dickhead of a brother who just barged into my room like the annoying thing he is and I had to close that tab before I could finish it off! :{

WHAT IS UP WITH THIS ONTAE CUTENESS??? I CAN'T EVEN TAKE IT LIKE OMYGOSH >.< I love love love their friendship. Honestly I'm not even a OnTae fan but I think you're making me one. But I was angry at Jinki for not telling Taemin the truth though. He and his pride issues aishh... Okay so I particularly laughed at this part

He would occasionally enter Jinki's room when he needed to take a shower or get his comics, since most of his stuff was in his room. He would pass right in front of Jinki, making sure that he had seen him as if trying to remind Jinki that he still exists, and marches back to his room scrunching his nose without sparing a second glance, troubling Jinki even more. LOLOLOL!! I can imagine ( ... )