Slapdash Struggles

Apr 18, 2012 20:45


Title: Slapdash Struggles
Pairing: Jongkey
Genre: Romance, family, fluff
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3800
Summary: Jonghyun isn't sure if he's cut out to be a dad, but he's willing to try.
“They’re…adoption papers?” Kibum asked, his voice breaking noticeably on the word ‘adoption’. )

jongkey, oneshot

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darkbill April 21 2012, 01:18:21 UTC
THIS IS SO ADORABLE T.T
can't handle my feelings now..

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bestplace April 21 2012, 13:33:10 UTC
omg thank you sweetie!! I'm glad you liked it! :'D ♥

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nejiluvver117 April 22 2012, 19:02:44 UTC
This is so beautiful ;;
My heart can't take this omfg <3

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bestplace April 22 2012, 21:18:57 UTC
omg thank you for reading. :'D <3

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just2wings April 25 2012, 01:51:08 UTC
I think it's safe to say that this was adorably cute :3
T'is fluffy but by no means meaningless ^^
I lol'ed at Jonghyun dog-walking, hehe.
The loud sex. *facepalms lol*
Every time the word dad, daddy or husband was written I felt all a;lsdjfl;asjdf;jlasdjf
and "sweetheart" <3
Sorry this comment isn't longer, I'm about to fall over from lack of sleep xD
I'd like to ask you if it's okay if I continue my domestic verse some day, because I have more ideas but I wouldn't want to impede on the preciousness you have here ^^

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bestplace April 25 2012, 22:09:49 UTC
omg thank you so much!!! :'D

no, your comment is perfect! ^^ you have to sleep!

why are you asking me?? I love your domestic stories. ;_; and god knows you write them a hella better than me. XD please, you don't have to ask, dear. ;w; go for it!! <333 I look forward to it. ♥

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just2wings July 7 2012, 15:54:11 UTC
(hi 2 months later xD //random
it's just to say that I wanted to ask you because I realized some of my ideas were really similar to what you had written here and I didn't want you to think I was stealing your ideas ^^ so I asked \o/)

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bestplace July 7 2012, 17:18:39 UTC
ohhh, no I know you would never! it's totally cool, I know our stories are similar, but you'd never do that. I hope you don't think I'm copying you, either. >< haha, thank you for clarifying. ^^

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photomusicart May 2 2012, 00:24:14 UTC
Oh my god, I can't believe I missed this :O
So here I am again, squealing and crying tears of joy on ur fluffy writing as usual. And damn, this has got to be one of my faves from all ur fics.
I really love how u portray Jongkey's feelings on this, especially when u described the movie and Jonghyun's reaction vs Key's reaction.
A billion aw's left my mouth when Jonghyun was looking over the adoption papers, and Kibum's reaction when he finds out what his husband is up to.
And omfg that part where Jjong meets his son for the first time, and the kid's hand....jhasdfisdhjfsdga <3 ( ... )

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bestplace May 3 2012, 21:57:10 UTC
wahh I'm so happy to be the one to receive your longest comment. >< <333

thank you so very much. I'm glad you liked it. ;w;

thanks for reading. :'D ♥

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kim_play96 June 16 2012, 09:56:59 UTC
OMG! It was so cute and fluffy!! I totally loved it..

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bestplace June 16 2012, 17:49:23 UTC
thanks so much. c: ♥

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