Slapdash Struggles

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Title: Slapdash Struggles
Pairing: Jongkey
Genre: Romance, family, fluff
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3800
Summary: Jonghyun isn't sure if he's cut out to be a dad, but he's willing to try.

Comments

[photomusicart]

Oh my god, I can't believe I missed this :O
So here I am again, squealing and crying tears of joy on ur fluffy writing as usual. And damn, this has got to be one of my faves from all ur fics.
I really love how u portray Jongkey's feelings on this, especially when u described the movie and Jonghyun's reaction vs Key's reaction.
A billion aw's left my mouth when Jonghyun was looking over the adoption papers, and Kibum's reaction when he finds out what his husband is up to.
And omfg that part where Jjong meets his son for the first time, and the kid's hand....jhasdfisdhjfsdga <3
I adored that part with the ramen!
And then the bed scene, oh my god that brought back memories from when I was a child and did the same thing to my parents, coming in their room and sleeping in between them :)
Ur fics never fails to amaze me, from ur perfect grammar and heartwarming plots, to ur style of writing.
Everything just feels so right and realistic (in a crazy good way), and I can imagine everything happening in real life.
If only Jongkey was truly like this....I'd die a happy woman xD
Anyway, srry for the awfully long comment, I think this is the longest one I've typed so far.
I can go on and on praising u, but all I can say right now is keep writing, don't stop.

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wahh I'm so happy to be the one to receive your longest comment. >< <333

thank you so very much. I'm glad you liked it. ;w;

thanks for reading. :'D ♥