Fic: The Dharma Years: 1975, part 3 of 3 (Lost; Sawyer/Juliet)

Oct 17, 2010 15:44


Title: The Dharma Years: 1975 (part 3 of 3)
Pairing: Sawyer/Juliet
Rating: R
Words: 7160
Summary: The sub docks in Tahiti on the first Saturday in October, and Sawyer almost can’t wrap his head around it, the idea that him and Juliet have got a whole month to live like normal people out in the real world.
A/N: Heyyyy, so this took about a million ( Read more... )

dharma_years, fanfiction, fic:lost, pairing:sawyer/juliet

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tia_no_one October 17 2010, 21:30:11 UTC
This was so beautiful, I can't even. The entire time they're off-island, oh my goodness, I just wanted them to stay there! I'm glad you had a scene with them greeting Miles and Jin again to ease the pain. Juliet's return-island infection was a great touch and made a lot of sense. I always wished they'd talked more on the show about whatever it was Dharma was vaccinating them for. And the whole final scene was just fantastic.

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bayloriffic October 18 2010, 00:28:09 UTC
Oh man, thanks so much ♥ ♥

And, yeah, that whole Dharma vaccination thing was one of the storylines that I really wished had gone somewhere. I mean, Desmond must have been injecting himself with something, right? I wish I had the patience or ability to write like a really plotty fic about the mysteries of the island instead of just using them for some cheap Sawyer/Juliet angst, haha.

ANYWAY. I am super-glad that you liked this :)

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lormats October 17 2010, 21:49:26 UTC
*sighs* I can't form a coherent sentence of how much I love this fic of yours... and the last part is just *sighs again* so, so, so, so wonderful, the whole I love you part, how James feels like he isn't enough, until he kinda believes in her, in him, is just so amazing just how the relationship was, at least for me...

:) (I still can't form coherent thoughts I really looove this last part, as the whole fic, but this part I CAN'T EVEN!)♥

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bayloriffic October 18 2010, 00:31:01 UTC
Aw, thank youuuuu! I am so, so glad that you liked this ♥ ♥

And, oh man, you know that James had all kinds of doubts about how Juliet could love him. But that she eventually convinced him he was worth being loved and that he was a good person. (Haha...I'm such a sap when it comes to these two!)

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lormats October 18 2010, 00:37:03 UTC
I'm a sap too but this 2 are the most amazing couple ever! I'd kill to see this ILU exchanges cuz I think both of them always felt like the weren't enough they went thorugh different paths in life though... but at the end they were perfect for each other...

LOL I'm so corny talking about those 2... (Today I was listening to a song from KT Tunstall and I think it fits so wonderful Juliet's POV here at youtube :D)

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bayloriffic October 18 2010, 00:46:30 UTC
I think both of them always felt like the weren't enough they went thorugh different paths in life though... but at the end they were perfect for each other

AUGH, I KNOW RIGHT? One of my favorite things about them is how they were both so damaged and such outsiders and then they found this kind of missing piece with each other (and, oh man, that is the cheesiest sentence I've ever written, but whatevs. THEY ARE PERFECT AND WONDERFUL TOGETHER).

(And I just listened to that song--it's for sure a great Juliet song ♥)

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afishwithawish October 17 2010, 22:10:28 UTC
THE WHOLE LAST PART ALMOST HAD ME IN TEARS. I want to have babies with it. I love it so much. You captured perfectly their relationship and how they healed themselves through it. Heartbreaking and beautiful at the same time. I loved all of it of course, but that last part stood out for me. Amazing.
Update soon please! ❤

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bayloriffic October 18 2010, 00:33:47 UTC
THANK YOUUUUU ♥ ♥ ♥

I'm so very glad that you liked this! And I'm totally going to try to update as soon as I can. Now that I'm past the major angst-parts, it's getting easier (and more fun) to write :)

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effulgent_girl October 17 2010, 22:11:53 UTC
Is this the end? wah.

I've loved this whole wild ride you've taken them on in the Dharma years and wish we could have seen this on-screen. <3

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bayloriffic October 18 2010, 00:35:19 UTC
No, no, not the end yet! I'm still planning on getting through 1976 at least (and hopefully the beginning of '77 too, until Jack and Kate and everyone comes back).

I'm really glad to hear you're liking it! Thanks for the incredibly nice comment :)

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realist_romance October 18 2010, 01:58:36 UTC
bayloriffic October 18 2010, 20:01:41 UTC
Oh wow, thank you for the awesome feedback!

I'm so glad you're liking this and that you're finding it true to the show and characters--that's really amazing to hear ♥ ♥

I really wanted to do an off-island thing because I think that's the only way I could reconcile Juliet ever being happy on the island. Like she got to leave for a while and she realized that off-island in the 70s WASN'T her home; her home was with her friends and James (haha, I'm such a sap) and that the island had become an important part of her life.

Maybe it was the same van that those boys all found in the jungle that one episode!
Haha...I love this idea :)

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