Comments | bayloriffic: Fic: The Dharma Years: 1975, part 3 of 3 (Lost; Sawyer/Juliet)

bayloriffic

Fic: The Dharma Years: 1975, part 3 of 3 (Lost; Sawyer/Juliet)

Oct 17, 2010 15:44

Title: The Dharma Years: 1975 (part 3 of 3)
Pairing: Sawyer/Juliet
Rating: R
Words: 7160
Summary: The sub docks in Tahiti on the first Saturday in October, and Sawyer almost can’t wrap his head around it, the idea that him and Juliet have got a whole month to live like normal people out in the real world.
A/N: Heyyyy, so this took about a million ( Read more... )

dharma_years, fanfiction, fic:lost, pairing:sawyer/juliet

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bayloriffic October 19 2010, 23:30:05 UTC

Aw, THANK YOUUUU ♥ ♥ I'm super-glad that you liked it!

Sawyer, despite his outward appearance, can be such a softie at times

Haha, I know, right? I think one of the moments when I came to really love Sawyer was the mix tape plotline in season 3--he's such an adorable dork sometimes :) And I feel like his whole relationship with Juliet would have just increased that adorable dorkiness about a million-fold.

Congrats on finishing!

Oh, I've still got more to go! At least another year (...hopefully it won't take me that long to write it, haha)

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bayloriffic October 20 2010, 01:33:32 UTC

Haha, no worries, no worries. Sometimes I get confused about where I am/how much I have left.

Especially since there's at least 3 main parts, and then those have sub-parts, and then THOSE have sub-parts...it's a tiny bit absurd at this point :)

op_de_radio October 21 2010, 17:39:45 UTC

This was so amazing. :)
The end was just gorgeous and sweet.

bayloriffic October 21 2010, 22:47:24 UTC

Thank you so, so much!! I'm really glad you liked it ♥

gemini_ep October 22 2010, 00:26:51 UTC

I read this a few times since you posted it and it has to be my favorite series of months so far. I absolutely love LOVE October. It is really genius to have them off the island and being "normal" in the real world. The scene on the sub now has new meaning when they were talking about the real world. I just can't get enough of your Sawyer. He's so perfect but yet so broken and afraid and damaged but he is so committed to this woman. Ack! I hate she died. Sorry I have to get that out sometimes lol. The bedroom/wall scene/hottest love scene EVAH was absolutely wonderful. You have a real attention to detail. I too noticed how tall she was in "The End" and you incorporating it into your fic with the shoes is so kinky but wonderful. I'm just a freak! LOL! You always seem to touch on the unspoken desire that they both have for one another ( ... )

bayloriffic October 22 2010, 18:27:43 UTC

Oh wow, thank you for the completely amazing feedback!

The scene on the sub now has new meaning when they were talking about the real world

One of the things that I really wanted to do with this story is to work through all of the hints that the writers gave us without actually showing us what happened (GRRRR...STUPID WRITERS!) and part of that was Juliet's desire to get off the island and the way they talked about the real world on the sub.

I can't help but always think about everything we didn't see during Dharma. I personally feel "He's our you" or "Whatever Happened, Happened" could have been Dharma episodes.

I AGREE COMPLETELY. There should have been AT LEAST one Dharma episode. Like you said, we got so many episodes of the O6 in the real world (in both s5 and s4) and just these tiny glimpses of the Left Behinders in Dharmaville (and the Left Behinders >>>>>> the O6). Did we really need more O6 stuff? (Answer: NO WE DID NOT)

I also loved LOVED him taking care of her and the introduction of him calling her baby. You know what ( ... )