life on the moon (niall horan + ot5) r

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Title: Life on the Moon
Pairing: Niall-centric, Liam/Harry/Zayn/Louis, OT5
Rating: R
Word Count: ~11.300
Prompt: Liam/Harry/Zayn/Louis + Niall: Basically the four are in a perfectly happy polyamorous relationship and Niall having to deal with being in love with 1+ members of said polyamorous relationship and dwelling on why he isn't in the

Comments

[oanja]

I really liked this, a lot. The dynamics and how Niall felt so alone even when he was with the others. But mostly I just loved the way you fixed it. <3

[bail]

thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it! i did toy with the idea of not letting this turn into a ot5 ending, but niall deserves all the love, plus, i have to admit, i'm a sucker for a happy ending :)

[nature_aly]

I can never pass up an OT5 fic, everyone should write them always. Especially you, because this was awesome. Even though I knew he would get invited in somehow, for most of the time reading I was desperately trying not to cry from all the Niall-angst. I just have so many Niall being left out feelings, I want him to get all the love.

[bail]

couldn't agree more, ot5 fics are awesome! thank you so much, i'm glad that you liked it :)

niall definitely deserves all the love.

[beethemonster]

gosh, this was really really perfect. the beginning hurt so much, you broke my heart with it, & the ending was also just the way i like it ♥

[bail]

thank you so much, i'm glad you liked it! :)

[gaysiaftw]

ugh all that angst was so heart wrenchingly great
i really felt bad for niall but yay happy ot5 ending
this was fabulous, thank you so much for writing it!

[bail]

i'm glad you liked it, even if it was angsty, haha. ot5 is an awesome pairing. thank you for commenting! :)

[soundingawkward]

This is really beautifully written. I love your characterization and the way you described the way Niall felt, being left out and alone.
Also, just all the little moments, when the boys were trying to 'seduce' Niall into their little arrangement, they were wonderful and I also loved Zayn's sort of 'deep' presence. Idk, just how he'd be watching, or the little moves he'd make.

Anyways this was perfect and all kinds of wonderful. Thank you so much for writing it love.

[bail]

angsty, clueless!niall is the best.

thank you so much for commenting! :)