life on the moon (niall horan + ot5) r

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Title: Life on the Moon
Pairing: Niall-centric, Liam/Harry/Zayn/Louis, OT5
Rating: R
Word Count: ~11.300
Prompt: Liam/Harry/Zayn/Louis + Niall: Basically the four are in a perfectly happy polyamorous relationship and Niall having to deal with being in love with 1+ members of said polyamorous relationship and dwelling on why he isn't in the

Comments

[solaflora]

well that was an emotional roller coaster. oh wow I was hurting for Niall so badly in the beginning- feeling left out with your friends is the worst feeling ever and you captured it so well! thank goodness for the happy ending though; I loved how you resolved things and took it slow. this was great! you're a fantastic writer :)

[bail]

oh wow, thank you so much!

agreed, feeling left out when it comes to friends really is the worst feeling. i'm a sucker for happy ending, haha, and niall is probably my favourite so it didn't feel right to not let him be part of them.

i'm glad you liked it and thanks for the lovely comment :D

[miskowzen]

this was perfect, really. their 'present' was so well written, and i loved how they never meant to be without niall. basically i could go on and on, but to sum it up, this is perfect.

[bail]

so glad that you liked it :D

[miskowzen]

OF COURSE I LIKED IT OMG WHAT EVEN HOW DO YOU THINK THAT I WOULD NOT LIKE IT

[bail]

haha. well, i'm always a bit surprised and excitedly happy when people tell me they liked my fic :D

SO THANK YOU FOR LIKING IT ;)

[hungerpunch]

i'll agree with the person above who said they spent most of the time trying not to cry over the niall angst! niall is my favorite so him being so achingly alone was really getting me down, but you fixed it so perfectly! and this was just very well-written overall :) characterizations were perfect and feelings transferred effortlessly. such a satisfying read!

[bail]

niall is probably my favourite too. he deserves all the love, hands down. i'm glad you liked the angst. it was hard to write because personally i'm a sucker for fluff and happy endings, which is why i knew it had to end with a happy ot5 ending when i started to write it.

i'm glad to hear that you think the characterizations were good. it was my first 1d fic and both of my betas are not in this fandom, haha, so they didn't really know the boys.

thanks for the lovely comment! :)

[asweetdownfall]

dang it Kira why did you have to write 1D fic. SINCE ITS YOU AND I LOVE YOUR WRITING I HAD TO READ IT ajslesjglasjgljsalgjljsgojtlre

this is beautiful and aching and you did a really amazing job writing the boys (especially Niall). afjsljlajglsjagosajgosdogjsojt

and hiiiii I adore the ending. POLYAMORY FTW.

[bail]

lmao. i'm sorry, bb? except, not really. OH GOSH YOU ARE SO SWEET ♥

so glad you liked it! :D

POLYAMORY FTW INDEED! ;)

[mechanicalrain9]

Oh wow. This was amazing. It hurt and you broke my heart but then you put it back together. *sniffles* loved this.

[bail]

thank you so much! :)