Can't fight these bad intentions

May 20, 2016 08:07

Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt#: 127
Title: Can't fight these bad intentions
Word Counts: 40k+
Side Pairing(s): Minseok/fem!Luhan, blink-and-you’ll-miss-it!Jongin/Sehun, mentions of Jongdae/OFC, past!Baekhyun/Taeyeon, mentions of past!Chanyeol/OFC
Rating: NC-17 / Explicit
Warning(s): age gap (roughly 7 years), language, recreational drug use, underage ( Read more... )

word count: -50000, rating: nc-17, word count: +30000, [round 2] posting day 12

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shinealightrose May 20 2016, 07:20:04 UTC
I wasn't planning to read this entire thing tonight... 2 hours later, and I think I only got up once to move around, and I WAS DONE! This was such an amazing fic. Your humor, and the dialogue, Baekhyun's sarcasm, Chanyeol and his tight boxers and basketball shorts and PUPPYLIKE NUZZLING. The first few times they 'experimented' was great, but the first time they kissed, bodies undulated against one another- and I swear I think I died a little bit.

I need to take a moment and talk about fem!Luhan, and her adoring husband. That messed me with so much (by which I mean she was PERFECT). I kept making the same faces as you described her doing, and then realized I was sitting in a chair staring at my laptop making weird, crazy faces like... well, Luhan. Pretty picture, indeed.

But the BAEKYEOL! That UST. And all their assorted friends, and Kyungsoo setting Chanyeol up to annoy the neighbor guy- I should have known. ahahaha.
I want to wallow in this thing, seriously. It's the best. I love it. There. *cries* (those were good tears though)

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 09:59:12 UTC
Thanks a lot, dear first commenter ♥
I'm absolutely happy that people like my het!xiuhan idea... idk where it came from, honestly, but I really wanted to add them because OTP and also I didn't want everybody to be gay. So here you are!!! I liked writing female Luhan a lot, she's an evil cutiepie ♥

Oh and BTW I liked your fic a lot. It messed with my feelings. Let's be friends?

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shinealightrose June 4 2016, 14:05:34 UTC
Lol I got really nervous when I realized I was the first commenter. Like..../whispering/ where is everybody.... shouldn't they be here praising this thing???

Luhan as the evil cutiepie- still making my head spin in the best of all possible ways hehehe

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ext_2865606 May 20 2016, 19:58:48 UTC
OMG I read this all day and it's totally worth it. I don't even know what to say, it was just amazing and I haven't read something so beautiful in ages ( not to forget I read baekyeol everyday). I absolutely loved all the Star Wars jokes and game of throne ones 😂👏🏽👏🏽 just amazing, from start to ending the genius author kept it so smooth and entertaining it just made me read this in one go. Thank you Author for this amazing piece of brilliant work. Love you for this.

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:06:42 UTC
Haha I'm glad you appreciated the nerdy references!
Star Wars is such a big part of my life, tbh, I couldn't NOT share this!!
Thanks a lot for reading and dropping a comment, it means a lot ♥

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noonaofdarkness May 21 2016, 01:27:09 UTC
This is a masterpiece. I was so engrossed I read it in one go on a long bus ride and I am overwhelmed with feelings. I would quote the whole thing back to you, but alas I am on mobile ( ... )

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:10:45 UTC
Your comment was my favourite ♥♥♥ I read it many times, it made me all warm, your kind words went straight to my feels haha!
Ah and yeah the part about how I write the sexy parts well...I've read a lot of m/m fics, and I don't really enjoy reading yaoi manga, so I guess it's more based on that. And even though I don't have personal experience in terms of male gay sex, I know how things work...
And yeah, the reason why wine hangover was accurate is because, obviously, it's a 'been there, done that' situation hahahaha...ha...ha...

We're friends already, I was so happy when I saw your comment, honestly! Now you know it's me haha!
Thanks a lot anyway for dropping this lovely comment, I LOVED IT ♥♥

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obliviousowl May 21 2016, 11:45:06 UTC
STAR WARS REFERENCES
BAEKHYUN HAN SOLO-ED
I'm: sleep deprived, on finals week and a walking nervous-system

One of my favourites, I love this sosososososososo much. It was totally worth it reading the whole night. I'm seriously in love.

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:13:00 UTC
AAAAAAAAAQSJKDFQZLGZEJ you're so cute. Your comment is so cute ♥
I hope finals went well BTW. They're probably over now, you have to be relieved ^^
And yeah, Star Wars...MY LIFE IN A NUTSHELL IS WATCHING STAR WARS ON VHS AND SPAZZING OVER IT
Then buying all the fancy DVD boxes / bluray boxes / ALL THE MERCHANDISE ALL THE GOODS
Well, sorry.

Thanks for the lovely comment ♥

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southofkang May 21 2016, 19:46:17 UTC

*Screams* How do I start? I cannot find enough words to say how I love this fic!! I love you authornim! I really reallywish I can give a decent comment but I suck. I just want you to know that I really rwally enjoyed reading this. Baekhyun’s inner turmoil about his feelings to Chanyeol is one of my fave coz I can feel his desperation. I am really really excited for the reveals. *shoots hearts at you*

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:14:27 UTC
Awwww noooooo~~ your comment doesn't suck at all! The fact that you commented here is enough already!!
I'm glad you appreciated the fic ^^
Thanks a lot for reading and dropping a comment, it means a lot ♥

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southofkang June 12 2016, 19:02:05 UTC
Aww.. Thank you! It’s nice to finally know you~ I’ve backtracked your othrr fics and I really loved it (I’ll dropped comments tho its late ㅜ.ㅜ) I’m a fan!! ♡

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