Can't fight these bad intentions

[baeconandeggs]

Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt#: 127
Title: Can't fight these bad intentions
Word Counts: 40k+
Side Pairing(s): Minseok/fem!Luhan, blink-and-you’ll-miss-it!Jongin/Sehun, mentions of Jongdae/OFC, past!Baekhyun/Taeyeon, mentions of past!Chanyeol/OFC
Rating: NC-17 / Explicit
Warning(s): age gap (roughly 7 years), language, recreational drug use, underage

Comments

[noonaofdarkness]

This is a masterpiece. I was so engrossed I read it in one go on a long bus ride and I am overwhelmed with feelings. I would quote the whole thing back to you, but alas I am on mobile.

I love love love how you worked with the age gap, and baekhyun's insecurities and the way their relationship progressed. Omg that first kiss was amazing and the build up was so well written. I Empathized with baekhyun through every step of his growth as a character and person. All the characters felt so real, and baekhyun's mind space was so relatable.

And chanyeol!! He was so lovely, and dumb, and unforgiveably hot (you wrote that part so well). I loved reading baekhyun's gradual attraction to him from physical to romantic and ahhhhh. (Lots of heart eye emojis). The smut was also top notch and very accurate (idk how to say it, but like it didn't feel like mechanical, yaoi sex. Ya know?)

Also, your depiction of a wine hangover was the most accurate thing I've ever read. All of your descriptions were wonderful, actually. I giggled a lot to myself while reading this and the woman next to me probably thought I was a bit nuts. But that's okay because I thoroughly enjoyed every minute of this. Such a joy to read and I could keep praising you endlessly. But I fear I'm getting redundant.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this story. Can't wait for reveals!!

[park_noodle]

Your comment was my favourite ♥♥♥ I read it many times, it made me all warm, your kind words went straight to my feels haha!
Ah and yeah the part about how I write the sexy parts well...I've read a lot of m/m fics, and I don't really enjoy reading yaoi manga, so I guess it's more based on that. And even though I don't have personal experience in terms of male gay sex, I know how things work...
And yeah, the reason why wine hangover was accurate is because, obviously, it's a 'been there, done that' situation hahahaha...ha...ha...

We're friends already, I was so happy when I saw your comment, honestly! Now you know it's me haha!
Thanks a lot anyway for dropping this lovely comment, I LOVED IT ♥♥