Can't fight these bad intentions

May 20, 2016 08:07

Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt#: 127
Title: Can't fight these bad intentions
Word Counts: 40k+
Side Pairing(s): Minseok/fem!Luhan, blink-and-you’ll-miss-it!Jongin/Sehun, mentions of Jongdae/OFC, past!Baekhyun/Taeyeon, mentions of past!Chanyeol/OFC
Rating: NC-17 / Explicit
Warning(s): age gap (roughly 7 years), language, recreational drug use, underage ( Read more... )

word count: -50000, rating: nc-17, word count: +30000, [round 2] posting day 12

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singilu May 22 2016, 21:05:58 UTC
I'm happy Baekhyun managed to keep his muse despite his own reservations :D No really they were so cute! Thank you for a fun read.

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:16:01 UTC
You have no idea how happy I am that you read my fic because I'm a fan of yours haha...
I wanted to know which fic you wrote this year so I could read it because I loved your fics from last year's BAE!!
Thanks a lot anyway, for reading and dropping a comment ♥♥

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singilu June 4 2016, 22:13:25 UTC
haha I'm honored to have a fan :D My fic this year was ... quite different from last year but alas, writer's block and life has gotten majorly in the way :D I'm glad you like the one(s) from last year!

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ext_972835 May 23 2016, 08:00:37 UTC
i love this. like, a lot. a shit lottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt. probably everything EVERYTHING i've wanted ịn a fanfic. it totally absorbed me in and had me curl my toes over every tiny single detail, so lovely, so realistic, so funny and witty, so... Baekyeol tbh.

truth to be told, i wasn't expecting much when i first read the summary, i decided to read only to while away the time. the beginning didn't start too smoothly to me, seem quite disjointed but i kept going. it eventually got better and i just :(((((((((((((( i don't think words can describe how much i love this, i'm just saying that i spent the whole night reading this only to NOT regret one bit in the morning to take a day off at school BECAUSE THIS IS SO WORTH IT. it's scary how much effect this has on me the whole next day, the butterfly in my stomach just wouldn't stop T_T

i'm a sucker for age gap and fuck buddies! Baekyeol. i'm gonna reread this and leave you a more proper comment :((

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:24:21 UTC
Ah I'm so sorry it didn't appeal to you at the beginning... but I'm also happy you gave my fic a chance and continued reading!! And I appreciate the feedback, it means a lot to me so that I can improve in the future ^^
Ugh you had to miss school because of me OMG I hope you didn't get in trouble >.<
Thanks a lot anyway for reading and commenting ♥

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owmichi May 23 2016, 17:19:54 UTC
AJDKDLFHDJGJLSDBHSJS AGE GAP!AU X NO STRINGS ATTACHED!AU MY FAVE AUS IN ONE FIC IM NOT OKAY REALLY IM NOT FINE DHFJSKXKSJXJKDS THIS IS REALLY GOODDDDDDD HOW YOU WROTE IT WAS PERFECT AND AMAZING I COULD NOT ASK FOR MOREEEEEEE I LOVE HOW THEIR RELATIONSHIP DEVELOPED THE WAY U DESCRIBED IT LIKE IT WAS HAPPENING FOR REAL IN MY EYES THIS REALLY GOT ME SMILING AND FEELING ALL HOT BC HOW CAN I NOOOOT YOUR SMUT WAS SO GOOOOOD I LOVE EVERY INCH OF IT SPECIALLY WHEN CHANYEOL ASKED BAEKHYUN TO FUCK HIM IN THE CUTEST AND SWEETEST WAY SJDKSKXKSJJDJD AND GEEEZZZ OMG BAEKHYUN'S ACKNOWLEDEMENT FOR HIS BOOK AHDJSKDMWHD THAT WAS REALLY SWEEEET HE CONFESSED HIS LOVE FOR CHANYEOL IN HIS BOOK AND THATS JUST SHDJWKKDSNFHSB I LOVE ALL OF BAEKHYUN'S INSECURITIES AND DUMBNESS AND CHANYEOL BEING SO IN LOVE WITH HIM UUUGGGHHH THEYRESO PERFECT YOU WROTE THEIR RELATIONSHIP SO PERFECTLY IM CRYING IN HAPPINESS THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS BEAUTY

AND OMG THE FEM LUHAN WAS AMAZING HAHAHAHHAHAHA I SHIP XIUHAN AND GEEEZZZ THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST PART OF THIS FIC

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:28:33 UTC
Haha I had a hard time reading all that punctuation-less capslock but I guess the amount of keyboard-smash means you liked it, so it's perfectly okay ^^
I'm happy you liked my fic, and HEY!!!! it's me haha, hi *waves at you*
(and yeah fem!Luhan is a treat, to read AND write)

Thanks a lot for reading and dropping a comment bb ♥♥

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anonymous May 24 2016, 05:52:38 UTC
INCREDIBLE. First word I can think of to describe this fic (also hot but...) There were so many parts that made me laugh hysterically, and the way you wrote each of your characters was so believable and real so serious props to you! I loved your take on neighbors AU which is one of my favorite prompts of all time, and this is definitely a new fav! The little brotherly moments with baekbeom were so cute too. I seriously love of all the movies/shows the two watched together in this doc also, you have great taste ;) there were so many little moments in this fic that were just so adorable or hot and I seriously couldn't stop reading. I can't say enough good things about your story and your writing. Thank you for this!!!

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:33:01 UTC
Your comment is GOLD, like, seriously!!
So many compliments, so many kind words about how I write and how you like my taste haha!
I'm happy you found the my take on the AU realistic, because it was the aim, and I guess it worked??????
Well anyway, I'm very, very thankful for your nice comment, it means a lot to me
THANK YOU ♥

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jadeu May 25 2016, 04:50:35 UTC
OH GOD CAN I JUST KISS WHOEVER WROTE THIS MASTERPIECE!???!!!!?!?
THIS WAS SO PERFECT I CAN'T EVEN LEVAE A PROPER COMMENT BUT THIS WAS REALLY GOOD AND HOT HUHU IT'S JUST PERFECT I DONT HAVE OTHER WORDS TT ALL THE FEELS IT GAVE ME TTvTT

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:41:27 UTC
I always appreciate a good old all-capslock comment haha!
I'm happy you liked it ^^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting <3

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jadeu June 4 2016, 12:19:42 UTC
Oh gosh TYSM for writing it !!! I really reallyyyyyy loved it i can't get enough of saying that. The capslock didnt even justify the feeeeeeels your fic gave me tbh >

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