Can't fight these bad intentions

May 20, 2016 08:07

Author: ANONYMOUS
Prompt#: 127
Title: Can't fight these bad intentions
Word Counts: 40k+
Side Pairing(s): Minseok/fem!Luhan, blink-and-you’ll-miss-it!Jongin/Sehun, mentions of Jongdae/OFC, past!Baekhyun/Taeyeon, mentions of past!Chanyeol/OFC
Rating: NC-17 / Explicit
Warning(s): age gap (roughly 7 years), language, recreational drug use, underage ( Read more... )

word count: -50000, rating: nc-17, word count: +30000, [round 2] posting day 12

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anonymous May 25 2016, 17:11:50 UTC
Thank you so much for writing this fic. The length was so satisfying, I love it so much. Bless Kyungsoo omg.

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:42:05 UTC
Long-fics are the best. Not to write, tho haha!!!
I'm happy you liked it =)
Thanks for reading and commenting <3

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mminnex May 26 2016, 23:39:37 UTC
i loved the pace of this story, and how chanyeol and baekhyun's relationship developed. somewhat shy chanyeol and dominant baek was wicked hot XD

i had a feeling that chanyeol's roommate was kyungsoo. bless kyungsoo :'D

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:44:25 UTC
I love, /love/, LOOOOOOOVE a controlling Baekhyun!!! Headcanon right here.
Oh you're an incentive one, well done ^^
Thanks a lot for reading and dropping a comment ♥

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w_anderingheart May 27 2016, 00:29:26 UTC
This was so great!

I really enjoy this baekyeol relationship dynamic and this whole story was so fun! <3 AND THE HET!XIUHAN!!!! that slayed me. setting it in usa was also a nice change of pace, and i think it fit the narrative altogether. you did a lovely job! :D

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:47:18 UTC
oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh OMGOMGOMG you commented on my fic, you, the author of one of my favourite fics of this year's BAE, let me breathe *exhales loudly*
I'm extremely happy and honoured you liked my fic. And yeah, for the het!xiuhan...GUILTY AS CHARGED!!! They're adorable together, but I didn't want everybody to be gay, so...that's the result. And I admit I also like fem!Luhan a whole lot haha!
Oh and I'm relieved it didn't bother people that I set the story in the US..a risky choice, but uh.
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!! ♥♥

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<3 anonymous May 27 2016, 08:09:38 UTC
Ahhhhhhhhh seriously this is the best ! Like, I don't even watch any star wars movies (don't kill me) but I enjoyed all of the star wars references in here. The "did you just han soloed me" got me like woahh so fitting. I love how their relationship is so real like real in real life type ( if that's even make sense). I could imagined this in real life event where chanbaek (mostly in baek's cases) are so dumb but so in love with one another. How baekhyun belittled himself like that and thought that chanyeol deserves better than him. But oh goshhh chanyeol is so perfect, I was falling for his sweet character. Although one thing I couldn't enjoy is chanyeol's bottoming, never a fan of bottom chanyeol (sorry xD) but aside from that, I love all of the sex rendezvous love loveee them. I love all of the minor characters, especially Soo who turned out to be Chanbaek's cupid in disguise ! Overall totally totally enjoyed this fic. This is long but worth every penny of my time. Thank you who ever you are...this is awesomenest !!! <3

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RE: <3 park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:57:20 UTC
Well well well. First of all, you HAVE to watch Star Wars. Like, right now!!!
Second of all, thanks for your nice words. I wanted to set a realistic feel to the fic, and I'm glad you're not the first to tell me that I managed to do it. So, that's great. Also, I'm happy that you liked the story.
About bottom!Chanyeol, I'm sorry you don't like it. It's a matter of personal preferences, and thankfully it didn't stop you from reading further, so I guess it's okay. However, I will NEVER stop writing bottom!Chanyeol, nor will I stop writing bottom!Baekhyun, because in my headcanon they're switching lovers, and well, sorry about that but I think it's how most male gay relationships work.
Anyway, thank you for reading and commenting, it means a lot, even if we don't share the same taste for everything!!! <3

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gellis813 May 28 2016, 01:53:06 UTC
This was so awesome!!!!! Thank you so much for writing I really enjoyed reading ^^

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park_noodle June 4 2016, 10:58:26 UTC
I'm happy you liked it!
Thanks for reading and dropping a comment <3

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