Comments | babydee1: Chlollie Fanfic: Slingshot, Chapter 2

babydee1

Chlollie Fanfic: Slingshot, Chapter 2

Aug 10, 2009 17:47

I have been reliably informed that what I call a catapult, y'all call a slingshot. So I've renamed the title, and have edited chapter one to reflect that as well.

Bah. maybe I'll just get a beta next time!

Here's more. Enjoy! Awesome banner by geek_or_unique . Thanks, babes!

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chlollie, smallville, chloe, slingshot, oliver, fanfic, series:chlollieseries

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laurelnola August 10 2009, 18:05:45 UTC

An Update! AWESOME ( ... )

babydee1 August 27 2009, 12:02:40 UTC

"Ha! I was wondering how in the hell he was carrying around a catapult! *hee* That was one Britishism I didn't know, apparently ( ... )

eternal_moonie August 10 2009, 19:18:57 UTC

OMG! This chapter is totally awesome!!! Queen Oliver! LOLZ!
I love it!!!

babydee1 August 27 2009, 12:21:25 UTC

"OMG! This chapter is totally awesome!!! Queen Oliver! LOLZ!
I love it!!!"

That was funny, wasn't it? ;-)

Glad you like!

phoenixnz August 10 2009, 19:52:51 UTC

Oh Dee, what a priceless treasure you are. You come up with some amazing stories at times and this is going to be another winner, I can tell. *Hugs*

babydee1 August 27 2009, 13:19:26 UTC

Aw, thanks for the vote of confidence, Leanne. It always means a lot when it comes from kick-ass writers such as yourself!

carcassi August 10 2009, 20:42:08 UTC

Two updates in one day, and you haven't even gotten back yet from vaycay? *Awed look* How do you do it, Dee? We serial procrastinators would love to know your secret. :)

I pretty much want to second everything Dawn said. I grinned like a fool when Ollie fired off his very first shot as the (mini) Green Arrow. And YAY for our five-year-old ball of fire!

The little girl didn’t waste any time. She sank her teeth into the man’s hand and bit him as hard as she could. The man roared and dropped her, and she fell to the floor. In less than a second she shot to her feet and took off like a bullet from a gun.

I love fighter!Chloe! I've missed her a lot recently. *Sighs*

Oooh, so this is about Moira? I'd totally forgotten that LuthorCorp was after her. Chloe's not even in first grade yet, and she's already fighting the Luthors. Neat one, Dee!!

She tilted her head as she read the inscription. “Queen Oliver? That’s a funny name for a boy.”I think Dawn and I were ROTFL'ing in stereo after reading that! *G* Also, it's so like ( ... )

babydee1 August 27 2009, 16:33:36 UTC

"Oooh, so this is about Moira? I'd totally forgotten that LuthorCorp was after her. Chloe's not even in first grade yet, and she's already fighting the Luthors. Neat one, Dee!!"

You know I like my finer plot points, I do! :-P And since Luthorcorp's involved, you can be sure that I'll throw Lex in there somewhere. Just for you. :)

"I think Dawn and I were ROTFL'ing in stereo after reading that! *G* Also, it's so like Chloe to want proof before accepting someone's story. She's not an intrepid reporter for nothing, after all."

It's lovely comments like these that make me yearn for S1-5 Chloe. No worries - since I'm writing this in line with Dawn's Chlollieverse, everything's hunkydory on that front! :)

"*Pauses* *Cranes neck this way and that*
OK, where's the next update? :D"

Patience is a virtue, Debs! :)

lilmoochie August 10 2009, 22:31:59 UTC

Ollie's a hero,Ollie's a hero. Beautimous! Absolutely. It so warms my heart that you're writing Chlolle, really. I had a crack about a catapult but soo not appropriate for the sweetness of this fic ( HUGE :) ) LOL!!

This is so good and cute! Cannot wait for more...

babydee1 August 27 2009, 16:41:01 UTC

To hear all that from you just makes me wanna SQUEE! Thanks so much, babes.

"I had a crack about a catapult but soo not appropriate for the sweetness of this fic ( HUGE :) ) LOL!!"

Oh, I wanna hear it! Seriously!!! :-D