fic: Colors run prime (5/?)

[ayzilia]

Title: Colors run prime (5/?)
Author:ayzilia
Fandom: DCU
Paring: Tim/Kon
Rating: R, for language
Word Count: 3,660
Summary: In the wake of the Wayne-Kryptonian Treaty, Tim and Kon struggle to adjust their dreams, prejudices, and expectations to fit into the scope of their new life together. A/N: This follows My kind is not your kind. Read that first for clarity

Comments

[sweety8587]

IS IT CHRISTMAS? two updates so close together, its gotta be christmas >U<

ashdihasd Tim oh Tim i want to shake you till your teeth rattle inside that pretty head of yours. talk about nine kinds of frustrating!

half way through this chapter i was like "OOO Is this gonna go down this route?" but then bam, you took a completely different path and its so much more interesting * U* i was completely on teh edge of my seat with this chapter! even more so with the conversation that tim and kon had near the end! super tense atmosphere between there too ; n; when oh when will they start to get along /shiku shiku

[ayzilia]

Squee! Yah, I had actually written out that rooftop talk months ago, but I just had to get the boys there. I'm so glad you liked! <3

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[ayzilia]

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[jamakura]

WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!1 Just happened to check today and see two new chapters!!! I am so excited and I love you!

[ayzilia]

*blushes* Thank you! I hope you enjoy!

[jamakura]

Well now that I've sat down and read bot stories....several times. I love the roof top conversation, I love how Kon wants a kiss on the cheek. I also Love how you Tim is just so very Tim-like! Also Jason giving him a new identity... awesome!

[ayzilia]

Yay! I am glad you like! Kon wanting a innocent kiss is soooo cute! He really is just that earnest. Tim bing Tim-like is what I was going for so yay! Also Jason and Tim. I love their relationship. Red Robin! Yum!

I've gotten a lot of sleep as you can tell. We need a sarcasm font so bad.

But sweet! thanks for reading and thanks for such a nice review!

[larsinger29]

I was planning on writing a comment to the previous chapter, but was exhausted and figured I'd do it today. And then, lo and behold, another new chapter appears

[ayzilia]

I am so happy and relieved you are liking the slow pace. I'm worried readers may get impatient, but the way I see it, there is too much in the way for them to just fall into each others arms. And they still have a ways to go.

Also, your understanding about my interpretation of these characters makes me feel amazing! I am happy happy happy they are coming across as I see them in my head.

Thank you for the lovely review!

but where are colors in the story..

[shadydarling]

This pacing is awesome! AWESOME! Sorry, I'm just exciting to see another update after this whole time :)
Ah, I can totally understand Tim's fear :) Adorable characters, <3
I see a lot of fanon using this supposed Kon's ability to tell Tim's heartbeat apart. That is so weird. How is that even plausible? Heart rates change. Whatever, it's not important in a verse where magic exists.
Ah, I didn't realise that you'll give Kryptonians varied powers but then, that is a perfect idea!
I loved how you previously made Tim point out that liking someone for their looks is useless! :) <3

Re: but where are colors in the story..

[ayzilia]

Squee! Glad you liked! Also no problem being excited about the updates. I'm excited I'm getting them up quicker. I was referring in my comment above to the pacing of their relationship development and how it is agonizingly slow. One step forward two steps back and all