Sounds nifty! I was organizing my bookshelves the other day, and ran across some of your old stories (I keep them with my old notebooks on the top shelf. *noddle* It's like a mini shrine for muses or something.). I'd forgotten how freaking awesome you are. And, since people tend to get better at stuff, I think you're well on your way to being world famous. If the world lasts long enough for you to send something to a publisher, at least. ^_^
Aww! Thanks, hun! *massive bear hug* My old stuff was shit, so based on that, I can say proudly that I have definitely improved. :] Remember Daeft, the FBI guy? Yeah, he has now been replaced with "RED," my new favorite story... I love how it's going to far, now that I finally have some time to work on it. How's this? :]
"In a fury of fiery passion and rage, she raised the MG43; the neon lights glistened off the cool steel, making it burn as bright and as red as blood. Her brown eyes were ablaze with hatred, and her grip tightened on the massive gun while her legs moved into a fighter’s stance. She stood her ground with the strength of a hundred warriors, and her voice leaked from her vivid pink lips like a poison meant to strike the life from anyone that was against her."
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I was organizing my bookshelves the other day, and ran across some of your old stories (I keep them with my old notebooks on the top shelf. *noddle* It's like a mini shrine for muses or something.). I'd forgotten how freaking awesome you are. And, since people tend to get better at stuff, I think you're well on your way to being world famous.
If the world lasts long enough for you to send something to a publisher, at least. ^_^
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"In a fury of fiery passion and rage, she raised the MG43; the neon lights glistened off the cool steel, making it burn as bright and as red as blood. Her brown eyes were ablaze with hatred, and her grip tightened on the massive gun while her legs moved into a fighter’s stance. She stood her ground with the strength of a hundred warriors, and her voice leaked from her vivid pink lips like a poison meant to strike the life from anyone that was against her."
Much better, no?
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No more Daeft, then? That's a shame. He was coo'.
Lots and lots better. I definately want to read one of your newer stories. I think it'd be nifty, especially since the most recent one I have is 2006.
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Thankies! :] I have to actually finish one first. RED is well on it's way, though... I love it so much! *huggles the Word file*
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