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The Definition of Want - Chapter 8

Jul 03, 2010 13:22

Title: The Definition of Want
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: M
Characters: Bella, Jacob, Edward, and others (J/B)
Genre: Romance/Humor/Angst -- you know, all the good ones.
Warnings: Bad language and eventual sex.

Summary: You know how Edward offered to let Bella and Jacob make puppies? And we all ( Read more... )

Comments 153

majestamoniet July 8 2010, 00:44:00 UTC

i c that tats plug you did there. :)

I'm thinking that Leah would enjoy getting the chance to pretend she's been sexin' Jake up, just so she can get a reaction out of Sam.

Gooooooooooo Jacob! Quil needed a good punch to the face. *mutters*fucking teenage boys.*mutters*

Hmm. I couldn't decide if Charlie was trying to threaten Jacob or cheer him on. I don't think Charlie really knows either.

I think I'm going to head over to the TATS discussion now and see what's going down...

Great chapter, bb!

audreyii_fic July 8 2010, 11:23:46 UTC

Thanks! And yes, I'm personally of the opinion that teenage boys need to be punched once a week just on principle. It's for their own good. (Probably teenage girls, too, but for some reason that's not considered okay.)

And yeah... I'm pretty sure Charlie doesn't have the slightest fucking clue what it is he's trying to say whenever he does something 'fatherly'. Ah, well, his heart is in the right place.

am_inthe_desert July 8 2010, 00:49:06 UTC

Oh!

Just oh.

Jake's will in his head. Leah's bite. Rachel's call. Billy. Charlie's little talk with Jake. Quil and Embry. I loved how Quil thought it was Leah but Embry the more observant of the two - just knows in his gut it's not.

And your coming soon - has me gnawing my nails again. A disgusting habit I thought I'd given up for good. Nail polish tastes like shit!

I don't know how I'm ever going to live through Tuesday without knowing what's going to happen next. I'd have to suck it up as I will be flying somewhere tomorrow and I don't even know if I'm getting wi-fi on that island! :(

But again, thank you for this. We shall have an appointment with Jack Daniels in the fall!

am_inthe_desert July 8 2010, 04:25:42 UTC

And for my reread, Jacob's Theme was playing through my speakers.

This waiting is gut-wrenching!

audreyii_fic July 8 2010, 12:45:16 UTC

Oh, honey, don't do that. You'll collapse into a little puddle of angst-goo, and that shit just NEVER comes out of the carpet.

am_inthe_desert July 8 2010, 14:50:36 UTC

I did. Now I'm going to have to strip the carpet and switch to wooden floors! :(

Thread 9

sleepy_sheep683 July 8 2010, 00:58:12 UTC

Poor Jacob. Why will nobody give him a cuddle? *stomps foot* So he's messed up, but the poor kid's in absolute bits. Just like the books, I'm kind of left furious at Edward and Bella for dragging him into their mindfuck of a relationship and putting him through this. You capture his utter isolation rather well, I feel.

Oh, and poor Charlie: ""You're a good kid," Charlie continued grudgingly, "and your father and I have been friends for more than twenty years. If you really think you still have a chance, then... But understand something. If you cause her more pain, you'll have to answer to me. I am tired of seeing my girl hurting. Are we clear?""

But... but... he doesn't see that Bella is ripping Jacob to pieces? Of course he doesn't; she's his daughter.

Enjoyed his angry fight with Quil, and Embry's insight.

""You missed a seriously epic event," Quil said, grinning. "You're not going to believe this, but did you know that catching a frisbee in your teeth really is awesome?..."This very nearly trumped watching a Gladiator ( ... )

dredhedred July 8 2010, 02:20:40 UTC

OK, I'll bite...
Gladiator Gingerbread man fighting Animal Crackers??

sleepy_sheep683 July 10 2010, 01:06:12 UTC

LOL- it was in 'Shrek- Happy Ever After' which turned out to be tons funnier than I was expecting. The gingerbread man and baker were down on their luck, so the baker was holding gladiator tournaments and people were betting on them. You can probably guess the rest.

dredhedred July 10 2010, 12:23:10 UTC

Funnier than you were expecting? It had to be better than the last one then.

I'm intrigued now, I like the sound of Gingerbread Gladiators. :D

Thread 6

anonymous July 8 2010, 01:02:02 UTC

I am currently ridiculously obsessed with this fic. If it were a novel I woul BUY it in hardcover and read it each night before I go to bed. Jacob makes my heart break and smile simultaneously. I've never so desperately wanted a teenager to get pregnant.

audreyii_fic July 8 2010, 11:34:03 UTC

Thanks so much! :) Sorry about the heartbreak... it, uh, kinda had to happen. (And now I wonder what kind of font I'd use in a hardcover copy. God, I'm weird.)

anonymous July 8 2010, 01:11:16 UTC

Gaaaahhhh, could you just...make every chapter about three times longer or something? Not enough!! It's taken me like three days to become utterly addicted to this story, and now I can't wait for Sunday. Gotta make my own Livejournal account now too, so I can stop being "Anonymous" (how annoying!) Loved every little bit of it...crumbs on the counter, Snoopy sheets. I SO appreciate these little touches that make them even more REAL. You're an amazing writer, hon - ditto every wonderful comment above! -K

anonymous July 8 2010, 03:40:41 UTC

So, just making it official...I'm no longer anonymous. Thanks for getting me hooked - I'm even reading over at TATS now. I'll be a junkie in no time! -K

gravity_moved July 8 2010, 03:41:56 UTC

DARNIT!! Strike that...maybe I'll learn to log in first. :p

audreyii_fic July 8 2010, 11:36:12 UTC

LOL. I'm glad you like! (And no, definitely can't make it three times longer, I am BARELY keeping up as is ;) ) And I'm glad you have an account and are starting in at TATS -- they are good fun folks. (Also, love that you used one of the icons. Tee.)

And thanks about the Snoopy sheets in particular. They made me giggle while writing them :)