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The Definition of Want - Chapter 8

Jul 03, 2010 13:22

Title: The Definition of Want
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: M
Characters: Bella, Jacob, Edward, and others (J/B)
Genre: Romance/Humor/Angst -- you know, all the good ones.
Warnings: Bad language and eventual sex.

Summary: You know how Edward offered to let Bella and Jacob make puppies? And we all ( Read more... )

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sleepy_sheep683 July 8 2010, 00:58:12 UTC

Poor Jacob. Why will nobody give him a cuddle? *stomps foot* So he's messed up, but the poor kid's in absolute bits. Just like the books, I'm kind of left furious at Edward and Bella for dragging him into their mindfuck of a relationship and putting him through this. You capture his utter isolation rather well, I feel.

Oh, and poor Charlie: ""You're a good kid," Charlie continued grudgingly, "and your father and I have been friends for more than twenty years. If you really think you still have a chance, then... But understand something. If you cause her more pain, you'll have to answer to me. I am tired of seeing my girl hurting. Are we clear?""

But... but... he doesn't see that Bella is ripping Jacob to pieces? Of course he doesn't; she's his daughter.

Enjoyed his angry fight with Quil, and Embry's insight.

""You missed a seriously epic event," Quil said, grinning. "You're not going to believe this, but did you know that catching a frisbee in your teeth really is awesome?..."This very nearly trumped watching a Gladiator ( ... )

dredhedred July 8 2010, 02:20:40 UTC

OK, I'll bite...
Gladiator Gingerbread man fighting Animal Crackers??

sleepy_sheep683 July 10 2010, 01:06:12 UTC

LOL- it was in 'Shrek- Happy Ever After' which turned out to be tons funnier than I was expecting. The gingerbread man and baker were down on their luck, so the baker was holding gladiator tournaments and people were betting on them. You can probably guess the rest.

dredhedred July 10 2010, 12:23:10 UTC

Funnier than you were expecting? It had to be better than the last one then.

I'm intrigued now, I like the sound of Gingerbread Gladiators. :D

audreyii_fic July 8 2010, 11:30:45 UTC

You capture his utter isolation rather well, I feel.

Thanks :) It was... more or less the point of this chapter, yeah. (I felt very sad for him while writing it. Actually most sad during the Rachel conversation. She represents normalcy, and she's pretty much abandoned him... *sniffle* Okay, okay, sorry, egotistical of me to tear up at my own writing.)

But... but... he doesn't see that Bella is ripping Jacob to pieces? Of course he doesn't; she's his daughter.

He probably sees it, but Protective Father HULK SMASH! usually overrides those sorts of things.

This very nearly trumped watching a Gladiator Gingerbread man fighting Animal Crackers for funniest moment of my day.

*blink* And... now you're going to tell me what the fuck you mean, right?

sleepy_sheep683 July 10 2010, 01:25:26 UTC

"She represents normalcy, and she's pretty much abandoned him.."

*sniff* poor little guy. Okay, he's not so little, but whatever.

"Okay, okay, sorry, egotistical of me to tear up at my own writing."

Hey, I often laugh at my own jokes in my writing...

"*blink* And... now you're going to tell me what the fuck you mean, right?
"

See above post. It probably made me laugh a lot more than it was supposed to.

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