New F/K Story: Edge of Snow

May 07, 2007 03:27

Title: Edge of Snow
Author: arrow00
Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 9,388
Warnings: Angstier than is really forgiveable.
See bottom for full warning.
Post CoTW, First-time.

UPDATE: Now in podfic format thanks to the multi-talented nos4a2no9

Edge of Snow )

fic, f/k, ds, slash, fraser, rayk

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renenet September 17 2007, 16:27:02 UTC
Hi. I am...just...holy crap, I'm speechless with awe. This was so. beautiful. I can't even -- ::makes gestures:: -- about the emotions and the relationship and the coming together. Suffice to say, you totally got to me. They totally got to me, and I did get lost in them. But, shit! Your prose! When I got to this moment:

What amazed me was how easily my blood left me, almost joyously, the deep, bright flow, fast, eager, running hotly from my body.

I swear I held my breath and found myself meditating on Fraser and how exquisitely, heartbreakingly symbolic that is. His own blood was eager to leave him. But he's not being maudlin there. He's just observing and reacting. ::hugs him:: ::hugs Ray:: :;hugs you:: Thank you!

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arrow00 September 21 2007, 04:39:56 UTC
Hi renenet: I have to say I loved writing that part. Thank you so much for reading and for your astute comments: Fraser observing, distancing himself by that means. And beautiful, persistent Ray breaking through. :)

Thank you so much for taking the time.

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creedcascade November 23 2007, 23:40:34 UTC
Just wanted to say how much I appreciated reading this. It was poetic. Character driven. True to the show. And beautiful, but haunting in places. Thank your writing it.

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arrow00 December 8 2007, 00:46:59 UTC
Thank you kindly, creed! I'm touched you enjoyed it.

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galenlisle December 13 2007, 03:00:36 UTC
i just read through all your f/k fic; i really enjoyed it! your writing has a way of pulling at the edges of loneliness/grief/fear of rejection that i found moving.

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arrow00 December 14 2007, 02:24:17 UTC
Thank you so kindly! I'm a real sucker for the loneliness I perceive in both Ray and Fraser.

I'm so glad you are enjoying my stories.

->A

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andeincascade January 23 2008, 02:57:46 UTC
God, this is gorgeous, stunning in its emotion. You show real insight into both Fraser and Ray and I'm kind of blown away just now. I wish I had more words to tell you how much I love it.

I wanted to read this before downloading the podfic and now I can't wait to hear it as well. And nos, I think, is the perfect person to give it life in audio.

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arrow00 January 24 2008, 09:22:05 UTC
hey, ande! what's a TS girl like you doing in a place like this? :)

I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. I'm so very thrilled Nos has recorded it; her voice is *perfect* for Fraser.

Thank you for your kind words.

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mmmarmalade January 23 2008, 08:54:09 UTC
Holy Flaming Jesus. Agh, I love you. Your gorgeous, damaged, WANTING Fraser voice and the feisty-but-tender Ray are just so exquisite. I toasted marshmallows on the hotness of this fic. *offers you a s'more*

Um, thank you, and this is so very, very memoried.

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arrow00 January 24 2008, 09:20:16 UTC
Mmmm. 'smores.

Thank you so much, m. You made my evening.

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