The Secrets We Keep- a short fanfic

[jenfrommars]

     Since I've been playing my new city elf, I got the inspiration for writing this while listening to The Kill by 30 Seconds to Mars. I prefer writing small, "snipits" of fanfics and thus here is just another of my little hatchlings. I've never posted in this specific community before so here it goes.

Title: The Secrets We Keep
Rating: PG-13 for

Comments

[decantate]

Awww! I really like this!

[jenfrommars]

Thank you :)

[twist_shimmy]

It's nice to see a Tabris who wanted to get married. I've always had a soft spot for Nelaros, myself, and I think what Feria became after his death is completely reasonable given the backstory you've provided. You get us into her head quickly, which is excellent.

There are some typos that jarred me out of the story once or twice, but the flow is good overall. In fact, I envy your ability to write short fic at all-- it's something I am working on. @_@

[jenfrommars]

Well thank you, I always worry I put too much extra fluff in. Oy, I always manage to miss some spelling errors despite my pet peeve for it.
Hah! I envy those who can write on-going fics, I loose interest and patience so quickly that short fics are more my style ;P