SOBS AT YOU author i really, really loved this fic ): words cannot describe how much i loved it. i'd only like to say that it would have been nice if you put a warning for attempted suicide, abuse, and rape? although all of the scenes were relativity short, you're very, very talented with writing and conveying emotions, and i think that's what makes it triggering.
that being said, i will just move on to say how much i love your way of describing emotions and showing them. they are really hard hitting, and you deliver them with amazing execution and perfect timing. and sometimes it's not even the feelings, but the thoughts, too. and all the intended things said that were never actually said.
i also loved this kind of atmosphere you set up for jonghyun. he doesn't expect anything new, his life is as dull and depressing as he makes it out to be, possibly even more. but then there's this little glimmer of hope, this little light that opens up, and the reader realizes it, when he spots the guitar. and quote time ):
Ahh I apologize for that! I've gotten so used to not putting warnings on my g-ri fics that I completely didn't think of adding it! As for short scenes, I always find myself writing things with so much more emotion and feeling when the scenes are short than with super descriptive, long paragraphs. I lose my train of thought that way. But I always feel that I'm not good with conveying emotions, so the fact that you felt it is very reassuring.
That is exactly how I wanted to portray Jonghyun, his life being completely routine and it's gotten to the point where nothing even excites him like it used to, and he just kind of doesn't give a care in the world anymore.
Thank you so much for this long comment, I appreciate these the most, and I'm glad you liked it<33
OHMYGOD--- greatest ending ever okay so I knew this was going to happen, kibum fading away and what not but i never expected it to be so heartbreaking jesus christ, i teared up so badly ;____; everything about this was perfect. their relationship development, their feelings, ughgt fjdñkms';s such a beautiful story. when i read this: pray that we meet again, think that the world was jealous of us. i couldn't get a hold of myself. ;__; i loved it, i truly loved it. ♥
Even though this entire fic was somewhat angsty, I wanted to end it with hope and make it a little happier for my readers since I'm always writing angst xO
Gahh, I'm so happy I was able to convey their feelings, it's reassuring to say the least :] As well as their relationship development, I was kind of skeptical about its progress and wondered if it might have been too fast? But thankfully it didn't come out like that.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for reading!
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that being said, i will just move on to say how much i love your way of describing emotions and showing them. they are really hard hitting, and you deliver them with amazing execution and perfect timing. and sometimes it's not even the feelings, but the thoughts, too. and all the intended things said that were never actually said.
i also loved this kind of atmosphere you set up for jonghyun. he doesn't expect anything new, his life is as dull and depressing as he makes it out to be, possibly even more. but then there's this little glimmer of hope, this little light that opens up, and the reader realizes it, when he spots the guitar. and quote time ):
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That is exactly how I wanted to portray Jonghyun, his life being completely routine and it's gotten to the point where nothing even excites him like it used to, and he just kind of doesn't give a care in the world anymore.
Thank you so much for this long comment, I appreciate these the most, and I'm glad you liked it<33
Thank you so much for reading!
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okay so I knew this was going to happen, kibum fading away and what not but i never expected it to be so heartbreaking jesus christ, i teared up so badly ;____; everything about this was perfect. their relationship development, their feelings, ughgt fjdñkms';s such a beautiful story.
when i read this:
pray that we meet again, think that the world was jealous of us.
i couldn't get a hold of myself. ;__; i loved it, i truly loved it.
♥
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Gahh, I'm so happy I was able to convey their feelings, it's reassuring to say the least :] As well as their relationship development, I was kind of skeptical about its progress and wondered if it might have been too fast? But thankfully it didn't come out like that.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for reading!
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Thank you so much for reading!
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And yes, please look forward to it! It's a happier fic, compared to this angsty one :]
Thank you so much for reading!
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