Baby Boom (or, Why you should always read the manual first) Chapter 3

Dec 05, 2008 02:39

Title (kindly provided by drharper and newsy891): Baby Boom (or, Why you should always read the manual first)
'Verse: G1 Transformers
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: TF cussing

Did I mention this bunny was persistent? )

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katsuko December 4 2008, 16:31:32 UTC
O.o *snickerfits* Why do I get the feeling that the little fraggers have retained their personalities and memories, and are playing this for all they're worth? And, possibly in the trines' case, bucking to stay so they can get back at Megatron for dumping them in the first place?

I. Am in love with this fic so much. Can't wait for more!

And I love the title; drharper and newsy891 came up with a good one ^__^

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ante_luce December 4 2008, 16:38:00 UTC
They did, didn't they ^_^

I've been dying to write that plot twist ever since the bunny popped into my head (Tylenol-Turkey and Number 4 provided me with no more excuse not to).

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katsuko December 4 2008, 16:42:40 UTC
*still snickering* I love it! Plot twists are always a blast, aren't they?

*giggle* Sunny didn't "lose" Warp, little fragger just 'ported to Sides (it would not surprise me if a certain other seeker cut it back on for him at the earliest opportunity, possibly while the twins had their backs turned)

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ante_luce December 4 2008, 16:49:21 UTC
~_^ Yes, yes they are.

Sneaky little mechs, aren't they?

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ante_luce December 4 2008, 16:39:10 UTC
That, or being carried manually on one (yes, I'm referring to a certain bunny on the bunny farm) >:3

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ante_luce December 4 2008, 16:39:58 UTC
*scatters pillows in case of CPU fritzing mediated crashing*

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sister_dear December 4 2008, 16:41:55 UTC
*blink blink*

*snicker*

Have to admit, I didn't see that one coming. I'll agree with Red: sly little fraggers. I love the way you've characterized Red so far in this fic, and that he was the one to figure it out.

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ante_luce December 4 2008, 16:50:53 UTC
Thanks, his response has been pinging my brain ever since I got bitten by the bunny XP

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sister_dear December 4 2008, 17:22:33 UTC
P.S. Actually, the security director amended, the medic was, actually getting a proper amount of recharge for once. Don't need that last comma.

(Why yes, I did just go and read it again, looking for all the sneaky things they might have been up to.) Carly giving the seekers hugs is now doubly funny.

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ante_luce December 4 2008, 17:26:25 UTC
Ah, I meant that as in the sense that Ratchet was actually faring better, as he was getting enough recharge. I'll try to figure out some clearer wording, I hope ^_^;;

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dark_daebereth December 4 2008, 16:46:16 UTC
Oh WOW! Hon, you got high-pitched giggles out of me at the end, and given that my voice has dropped into the very-low end of the spectrum from the flu, this is a feat and a half!

Just.... Jazz really was putting them through intense training huh? XD Oh, totally love this new direction.

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ante_luce December 4 2008, 16:52:24 UTC
Oh yes, very intense training. And he's getting a kick out of them not realising it.

Flu? Ai. *offers soup and tissues* Feel better soon :)

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dark_daebereth December 5 2008, 13:46:39 UTC
Yep, that's our Jazz alright. ^^

*snuggles in* Thankyou love!

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