Baby Boom (or, Why you should always read the manual first) Chapter 3

Dec 05, 2008 02:39

Title (kindly provided by drharper and newsy891): Baby Boom (or, Why you should always read the manual first)
'Verse: G1 Transformers
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: TF cussing

Did I mention this bunny was persistent? )

'verse: baby boom, fic

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sister_dear December 4 2008, 16:41:55 UTC
*blink blink*

*snicker*

Have to admit, I didn't see that one coming. I'll agree with Red: sly little fraggers. I love the way you've characterized Red so far in this fic, and that he was the one to figure it out.

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ante_luce December 4 2008, 16:50:53 UTC
Thanks, his response has been pinging my brain ever since I got bitten by the bunny XP

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sister_dear December 4 2008, 17:22:33 UTC
P.S. Actually, the security director amended, the medic was, actually getting a proper amount of recharge for once. Don't need that last comma.

(Why yes, I did just go and read it again, looking for all the sneaky things they might have been up to.) Carly giving the seekers hugs is now doubly funny.

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ante_luce December 4 2008, 17:26:25 UTC
Ah, I meant that as in the sense that Ratchet was actually faring better, as he was getting enough recharge. I'll try to figure out some clearer wording, I hope ^_^;;

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ante_luce December 4 2008, 17:31:40 UTC
*just realised that putting the word 'was' in italics would probably serve the purpose*

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