"heat" a Star Trek fanfiction

[ansley15]

“heat” by ansley15
Fandom: Star Trek IX
Pairing: Kirk/Spock/Uhura
Genre: Angst, romance, pon farr
Summary: Kirk knew a storm when he saw one, and this had been brewing in quiet desperation for months. When Spock goes into pon farr while he, Kirk, and Uhura are stranded on a planet and needs both humans to save him, uncomfortable truths edge to light.

Comments

[linstock]

“Angstsexual.”!! I LOVE it. So much is clear to me now….

[ansley15]

I know, right? I said to myself "I want to try my hand at writing smut for the first time! Let's make it kinky threesome pon farr smut!" and then it turned out to be this introspective, very psychological little ficlet that wasn't even that graphic. So I was like "Well, I guess angsting is my porn."

Thanks for reading, though :)

[linstock]

I understand smut cringe! To sachet into the genre gently I have posted some on the Star Trek Het Kink Meme, I figure that way only people who really want to read smut will find it…lets face it you can not be on a kink meme and get upset because there is smut! Down side almost no one comments on kink memes.
I do have some *cough* detailed stuff on my fan fic site… and I go hide any time I post something smutty.
And it is strange isn’t it how a story will insist on being the shape it wants regardless of what you, the writer, want!

[silvr_dagger]

This is brilliant. Brilliant, I say! The smut was very well done, IMO, but I enjoyed the quiet introspective bits much more, so I'm glad it took that turn. Always nice to see these characters and situations treated thoughtfully.

[ansley15]

Thank you for your kind words! I was afraid there was a little TOO much navel-gazing going on in this story, so I'm glad it worked for you.

[linstock]

First an apology ..I do tend to write long and overly detailed comments…Its just me , I try to keep it under control

[ansley15]

Thank you soo much for your long comment! And, actually, constructive criticism is ALWAYS welcome with me! I have a very thick skin, and since I have no beta, I rely heavily on lovely comments like yours to tell me when something isn't making sense

[stupendousgrl]

This was gorgeous. I never imagine Spock and Uhura drifting apart (because in my mind, when a Vulcan loves it is forever, be quiet!), but you did a great job writing a plausible situation.

I love how giving and un-selfish both Jim and Nyota are here.

[ansley15]

Thank you for your kind words! Comments always make my day:)

[the_physicist]

“Ah, but Commander, you were the one who once told me that often
free choice in an illusion..."
....understands what slips through him when he next speaks.

“There is always choice

yes, Yes, YES! You understand Spock's character so well!!!

“I think deep down inside, it's you he loves best of all.”

And your so mean. XD I was really worried that Spock didn't love
Uhura, but that was on purpose of course, hehe! So glad when I got to
Spock's thoughts and it showed how he does love her! Would have been
so sad if she was helping him through pon farr so jim and Spock can
get together afterwards :-(. Not that of course shed ever do
otherwise! She could never not help him! very well done though, especially after Vulcan's destruction it's so reasonable that it might be hard to keep a relationship together.

Was very surprised (in a good way!) when you had the sandwich with jim
taking Spock. I think I've read too many pon farr fics with the whole
'spock can't be topped' trope, lol.

The girl cranes her head over Spock's

[ansley15]

Thanks for commenting! I always appreciate hearing other people's opinions/input. Hope you enjoy the rest of the verse as well:)