original | chain of command

[miarr]

Original | WIP | 7800 words | BAT-ELLA verse | beta'd by electricpower and nekopyo.

Written for and dedicated to lukadron, to whom I promised a snippet story about Yue Guy and Remy, and who drew the gorgeous banner. Nobody knows this canon except us, but by all means, feel free to explore. :D Thanks to electricpower for minding my French and nekopyo for bugging me about chronology, and the both

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all your story belong to us

[lukadron]

gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

i am grinning from ear to ear here. look at what you do to me LOOK AT MEEEE wah! and you can use the art as much as you want (albeit i am a bit ashamed of the rough nature of this drawing, now ;-;)
it belongs to you as much as to me <3 ugh and this was so sexy...and different from yesterdays draft (tho i like both versions very much).
gui's accent, uhg *fans self*
and the descriptions..unf yes plz.

i am also in awe about what kind of words you used to describe the facilities and the room and the electronics and all *_______________* that was so cool~ and smart and...and....oh i love this universe so much already ~°D°~ you make this into sth real and incredible, sth that breathes and lives. jaaaa this is going to be epic, i just know it.

MOAR i demand.

Re: all your story belong to us

[miarr]

You've waited more than two months to get this comment, but today's the day, and at long last I can finally write the response you deserve:

MOAR i demand.

Wish? Command.

Hope you like it bb. It's from the bottom of my heart.

♥

Re: all your story belong to us

[lukadron]

DDDD

BLESSED BY LEX LUTHOR'S KRYPTONIAN TRACTOR, YOU KNOW IT.

[miarr]

Oh god Kassie, skdjhfks thank you so much. You don't know what this means to me. ♥ Obviously writers live with their heart on their sleeves, so I was prone to excessive weepiness from the start, but this it like my first big original piece and, just. Hearing from someone whose opinion I really value that it's good and intriguing completely blows me over the edge. I am OVERCOME WITH SHEER GLEE. Thank you a billion, and just, guh. My week = made.

I love that you pointed out the things which I am most attracted to in sci-fi (and original worldbuilding in general, really). Guess my preferences shine through! :D I really do love hinting at background intrigues and general worldbuilding expositionary details, but I was worried it'd come across as boring, pffft. ♥ Glad to see it wasn't so. Also, LOL, once again I boggle at our similarities: I, too, am prone to getting drawn into a fandom via one single fic. Love it when that happens. :D And hey, I hope that soon enough BAT-ELLA will become a proper fandom of its own-me and lukadron are slacking

FORGED IN THE HOLY FIRES OF ~JERUSALEM~

[miarr]

Hee! I love you, bb, I really truly do. ♥

(LMAO, "I love them like pie". DELICIOUS PIE, YUS INDEED. Your awesomeness, it even leaks unto your idioms! I am agog with delight.)

These are all very good reasons! VERILY, I AM ENCOURAGED. \o/ Also, what do you mean, 'resources'? I'd love any bones you can throw me because right now I'm due to start writing the script for the first episode and, uh, I haven't the faintest notion of how to go about it. Smooth, self, treeees smooth. /facepalm

So yeah, newbie alert. Any advice is appreciated. :D

[lemiru]

Oh miarr, I am so in awe at your abilities in writing in English. And it's not just the storytelling, but it's just... the way you describe things, it's just all THERE, behind my eyes, and it's awesome.

And I have nothing else to say because I'm lame and such, but I liked this very much indeed.

[miarr]

Oh, Miru. ♥ Miru. Thank you so much, I cannot even say. Your comment means the world to me, much because you yourself do, and hearing such lovely praise from someone so valuable and admired is simply delightful to meeeeeee. ♥

What I like about getting such level-headed replies is that it really helps me scope out my strengths and weaknesses as a writer. For instance, you and Kassie both pointed out that you liked the general worldbuilding, the atmosphere of the story (unless I'm misreading you, obvs), so I'll take that to mean it's something I am relatively more adept at. On the other hand, I know that pacing is the eternal and life-sapping bane of my very existence, so I suppose I'll have to work more on that. :D Hurrah for learning stuff about yourself! And also, uh, writing good. XD

skdjhflskf honestly thank you so much. I'm so glad you liked it. :D Obviously I am okay with the story, but hearing such positive feedback from you is a whole 'nother level of heartening. WIN, BB, PURE WIN. /loves on

[sabrina_il]

Oh man, I am SO LATE commenting on this fic. I read it and then life sort of happened and I was in no condition to comment and now that I am I can't remember precisely all the things I originally had to say.

However, let us start with: YOU ARE AWESOME because this is A SHITLOAD of words on an original fic of awesomeness and YOU GOT IT DONE BABY, YOU GOT IT DONE! :D

I love, love love the sharpness of your prose. I've said this before and I'll probably keep saying ti over every new thing you write. Just... sharp like a fucking blade, I swear. Imagery, mood, details packed into efficient phrasing